Poems for all the CB writers Options

[AzN_AssAul'][']

For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

[ryfitaDF]

the following work is one i just created and think is awful, but i hope you all like it. i think it's cute

"something told me"
by Lunchbox

Something tells me
That tonight won’t be the same
Something tells me
That my life is gunna change
Something tells me
I’ll be finding something new
Something tells me…

Something tells me
That my fate would misdirect
Something tells me
That right now is retrospect
Something tells me
I’ll be finding something new
Something tells me
I never thought I would find you

Something told me what to do
Something told me how to be
Something told me where to go
Something showed me how to see

Something tells me
The sun just dims that way
Dusk is warning
Be prepared for something great
Or catastrophic
Have my senses been woken?
I will find the tool
That will make me built or broken

Something told me where to be
Something told me who to know
Something told me to be calm
Something said go with the flow

Something made me so intolerant
Something made me criticize
Something made me speak my words
Something brought you into my eyes
Something made me want to stay
Something made me realize
Something made white out of gray
Someone gave me butterflies

Something tells me
That tonight won’t be the same
Something tells me
That my life is gunna change
Something tells me
I’ll be finding something new
Something tells me…

Something told me where to be
Something told me who to know
Something told me to be calm
Something said go with the flow
Something told me what to do
Something told me how to be
Something told me where to go
Something showed me how to see