Poems for all the CB writers Options

[AzN_AssAul'][']

For the poet in us all. Dunno if this is the right place for the thread, but here ya go. Feel free to post your poetry... And be open to criticism (hopefully constructive!). Here's one of mine...
Hope you like it. And give some cc plz...Ty

Moral Anaesthesia

We were always barred behind
each other's private walls;
with miles of air and oceanic mass,
words unspoken behind bullet-proof glass.
Helpless and stuck in a mere illusion,
a fleeting moment past much too soon;
the promise of God to a fool,
beauty too pure to ever be true.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

Tonight you tore down all dreams
built with white lies and deceit.
Where I once stood comfortably numb,
I weep and rot deaf, blind and dumb;
Feast in misery like cheap red wine,
the easiest substitute for the truth.
Moral anaesthesia, morphine for the soul -
the price you pay, for losing control.

I bite my lip as
I kiss you goodbye,
try to look away when
my love flies by.

I bite my lip and
repeat the old lie,
try to look away 'cause
boys
don't
cry.

[XaZnX07]

this one is my all time favorite that i wrote but its kinda long
after reading a few of my poems what do you guys think?
feel free to use these poems for your special some one just dont say you made it up because it wont be from the heart and you would just be lying to your gf or bf

I THINK YOU SHOULD KNOW WHAT I AM FEELING, I THINK YOU SHOULD KNOW WHO NEEDS YOU, DO YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I AM SAYING?

YOU SHOULD KNOW MY LOVE FOR YOU IS TRUE AND THAT U CAN TRUST ME.

AM I ASKING U TOO MUCH? AM I BEING SELFISH? IS WHAT I AM DOING WRONG OR IS JUST PLAIN OH CRAZY CAUSE I LOVE U SO MUCH?

I WILL WAIT FOR YOU TO THE VERY END OF TIME IF IT TAKES THAT LONG SO SHALL IT BE AS LONG AS I KNOW IN THE END WE WOULD BE TOGETHER ITS WORTH THE WAIT, ALL I NEED IS YOUR LOVE AND YOUR HEART.

DON`T YOU KNOW THAT I`M ON MY KNEES, DON`T YOU KNOW THAT I`M BEGGING PLEASE, WON`T YOU LET ME TAKE YOU INTO MY ARMS AND PROTECT YOU FROM ANY HARMS THAT COME IN YOUR WAY

TRUST ME BEAUTIFUL

NO MATTER HOW HARD I TRY I CAN`T LET YOU OUT OF MY MIND AND IN MY DREAMS

I WILL WAIT FOR U TO THE VERY END OF TIME AND LONGER

MY LOVE FOR U IS SO STRONG U WILL NEVA BE ERASE AND BE FORGOTON NOR BE REPLACE EVEN IF WE ARE APART, YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE MY HEART

WHEN I MET YOU I KNEW I WANTED US TO BE TOGETHER BUT NOW I WANT US TO BE TOGETHER FOR
EVA!!!!


I BEEN WAITING FOR THE RIGHT PERSON AND NOW THAT I HAVE FOUND YOU I WILL CONTINUE TO WAIT, EVEN IF IT WILL BE TO THE VERY END OF TIME AND IF MORE THAN SHALL IT BE,

LET ME HOLD YOU WARM IN MY ARMS LET ME PROTECT YOU WITH EVERYTHING I HAVE LET ME PROTECT YOU WITH ALL THE LOVE I HAVE FOR YOU.

I REALLY WANT YOU TO KNOW, ALL THE FEELINGS THAT I HAVE SO MUCH TO SHOW, HOW MUCH I HAVE BEEN LOVING YOU, NO MATTER WHAT HAPPENS I'LL BE THERE BY YOUR SIDE, IF YOU LET ME HOLD YOU HERE IN MY ARMS I WILL PROTECT YOU FROM ANY HARMS THAT WILL COME YOUR WAY, STAY WITH ME AND I WILL BE WITH U TILL THE VERY END OF TIME AND NEVA HURT YOU!!

TOGETHER WE CAN SHARE SOMETHING SO STRONG IT CAN NEVA BE ERASE AND BE FORGTON NOR BE REPLACE EVEN IF WE ARE APART, YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE MY HEART.

I WILL GIVE YOU ALL I HAVE AND EVERYTHING I HAVE, CAUSE YOU MEAN THE WHOLE WORLD TO ME AND EVEN MORE, I WILL LOVE YOU WITH EVERY THING I GOT STARTING FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART AND FOR EVA, AND NOTHING CAN BRING US APART BECAUSE YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE MY HEART.

I HOPE U WILL TRUST ME

"BEAUTIFUL" THIS IS HOW I FEEL