CONFUSED SOLDiER, [[POEM]] |
 Jun 20 2008, 12:15 AM
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HE ROCKS JORDANS AND NiKES.
STAYS FiTTED FROM JERSEYS TO TALL TEES HE SAyS THE ONLy PERSON THAT iNSPiRES HiM iS SPiKE LEE BUT A CONFUSED SOLDiER iS WHAT I SEE. JAiL iS WHERE HE MiGHT BE. HE'S TRyNA SET HiS MiND FREE HANGiN' WiTH THE WRONG CROWD, AND DOiN DRUGS LATELy. HiS EDUCATiON iS A MAyBE BUT iN REALiTy WE DONT COME EyE TO EyE, SO HE DONT SEE WHAT i SEE. "ONE BLOOD, NO CUZ!" HE REPS PROUDLy, HE iS DOiN THiNGS HE SEEN FROM T.V, "FREE My n*gga MONTY!" HE CHANTS ON THE STREETS LOUDLy. BUT ONCE AGAiN A CONFUSED SOLDiER iS ALL I SEE. -MiKKi
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Jun 20 2008, 12:22 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
this is pretty damn good. especially this part
JAiL iS WHERE HE MiGHT BE. HE'S TRyNA SET HiS MiND FREE HANGiN' WiTH THE WRONG CROWD, AND DOiN DRUGS LATELy. HiS EDUCATiON iS A MAyBE BUT iN REALiTy WE DONT COME EyE TO EyE, SO HE DONT SEE WHAT i SEE. good shit keep em coming |
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Jun 20 2008, 12:27 AM
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Woah. I like it. The first stanza is my favorite part
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