A mod can close the other topic "freestyle competition" because datru was right..that wasnt freestyling..and there's a difference between freestyle and rap, so new clean topic here. RAP COMPETITION.

NEW RULES//: The First 3 Posts Of Their Rap Lyrics, I will read and I will decide who had the best one. FIRST 3

Datru Katalyst is the second judge because i said so lol

What is the difference between rap and freestyling, anyways?

Freestyling is when you have to spit out the words in like a minute without changing anything..in this case, I know in "freestyle competetition" all of them backspaced. Understand? rap is completely different.

oh gosh.. not another one of these games..

yo, my name is leslie
and i can't rap for crap



PICK ME PICK ME

this is gonna be very entertaining to watch once people start rapping in here.

Man Jason.... why are you even trying?

Yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah,
yeah, yeah, yeah
Wdup, my name is Jackie
And I'll be here to make cha'll happy
Once I'll give all of this weed
Chu'll be saying "dis is all chu need"
So while you be listening to me rap,
Chu'll be waitin fo me to take a crap

haha.. good try. we need pro rappers in here, lol.

i need no weed nor any ecstasy
anyday you'd be taken down lyrically
next time when you see me on the street
you'd be beggin for mercy like im the police
get down below my knee and kiss my feet do anything to please me
you'd be sorry to ever meet me
you'd be teased in your own sleep

the first 3 lines were good, but i didn't get the last lines.

damn you pimp, your gettin on my good side
but i aint gona kiss you dumb a$$ feet so step aside
new sherrif in town so watch your back
take your cheap a$$ drugs and get yur head out da crack
i aint gona say it again
or u'll be in real pain tonight

ha. stupid asian rapping.

woa... im glad i quit rapping for asian pop and r&b. this doesn't even sound intense anymore.

tonight you be staying asleep under R.I.P being loney
i dont really wanna see you as a zombie, homie
cuz obviously you are way too ugly for me to see
your skin is horny green it looks like seaweed
go pick up a copy of a CD from jay-z
maybe you can learn a little sometin
shit blows up your brain insane
you'll kno that hip hops a game thats off the chain
its only for ppl with rhymes in their vains
so quit being lame, w/e you do nothins gonna change
so what do you do you when get bored at home?
PLAY Jordan Inc. Grand Theft Auto!
its only 39.00 so get your sh*t now or no
its the same price even at gamestop
if you cant efford it then get a job!
hop your way like a fob to the block
find that place mcdonalds and ask for a job
you can flip a burger thats better than jack's
hello sir, may i order a big mac?

i dunno, my head hurts

Man Jordan shut up you little chink
stop frontin while you runnin
didnt xzibit tell you to pimp your ass?
ha stop mean muggin
i got my magnum rifle
to shoot your ass flyin
dude stop lyin about shit
imma get crunk
make you all drunk
man stop da f**king funk
like your a purple haired punk
your just like a titanic shit that sunk
your banana as f**k
and i rap for bucks
im rappin in da stage
earning cash
while ya beggin for cash
go grab a good charlotte cd
to get ur punk ass leakin
man get some real stuff
imma hunt you down with my murda sight

i like how everyones just changing the words and making these raps up while if any rapper actually used it with the right beat, theyd be millionaires.

as for me, im cuban and i dont play like that, ya hurd?! XD

i didn't like that rhyming, no offense. constructive criticism fact 1: using the same letters unk too much. i dont like it. jordan's lines own this whole verse.



LOL! hahahahaha, changing the words.... nahhh... so far, i dont see any that many good lines here so i doubt this kind of rhyming can make them millionares.

you're a disgrace to our race...

okay. i cant believe yall are taking these seriously. geebus.

mmmmhmmm.. hip-hop has changed everybody, so look what happened.

yo jason man you a disgrace to our race//
take that gun in your avatar and point it to your face//
end ya life now, no, juss end your rap game//
put yo fingers round yo d**k and stick with that "wrap" game//
those lines were hella whack, i know why you made this thread//
so you can takes some notes on me and dread//
that you cant be good as me, what's your interest in hip hop ?//
take s'more notes and on tha stage flip-flop//


well, gotta get back to homework .. juss browsin this place and juss couldn't resist ... heh .. i'll be back ..

jasons asian? *shocked*

woa.... i gotta admit, even though that rhyming wasn't good, it owned jason's rhyming, LOL!!!



yeahhh

*shakes head*

jason your rap sucks in every single part
you aint even far enough cuz you a retard
and stop using ur cigar cuz you bustin ur heart
and you smell like fart perhaps you have SARS
your rhymes are lies and this is ur life
every time when i slide i make you cry
and you call that hip hop?
it sounds like a buncha slob from a fob
cant you see you cant ever beat me
i was a real seed raised from the streets
and now that seed's a tree and thats me
you were raised after feeding on pee
and you turned out to be a he-she
dont be mad cuz i called you a she-male
i know you thinkin bout hittin me with a frail
but you are really the one thats going to hell
nobodys buyin ur crack sales and you aint livin well
the next thing you know is that you end up in jail
you tried getting out after bail but then you fail
when you fainally came out from your trail, you turned pale
too much cigarettes got you crawling on the trail
basically this is wut im sayin
is that you are nothing but lame
you dont have a single cell in ur brain
cuz those druggs are giving you pain

wow..

whoa so much hating.. my eyes hurt when i read all that rap..

okay news. jason's and jordan's raps r both terrible just reading the rhymes itself, no offense.
we need a surprise hip-hopper in here. =D

Wait! Let me call in 50 cent to show these fools who can rap! *looks for cell phone*

azn_r4pf4n -- yea, you're totally right .. yea no offense jordan and jason .. but yea they're kinda .. .. dry ... ... lol.. cept tha part about 'slob from a fob' that was pretty good .. haha ..

roberts_pink_drums -- i don't know about you, but i don't think 50's that good .. -.-;;..

jnukes >>> lol I don't even listen to rap, hip hop, or r&b.. lol.. that's the only hip hop/rap/r&b singer i know.. sorry lol

but but. nothing about my rap. im so hurt...

yes i know i suck.

THERES A NEW AZN RAPPER CALLED ISRAEL!!!!!!!!

cough*

ahem*

sorry ...

seriously? hey, could u gimme the links of his songs or a link of his biography.? i gotta check it out

ummm.... idk... i was watching music vidoes and i just saw him...

ill look for it...

what record is he on?

uhhhhhh this is all going down in australia but idk if you guys are stil interested.. i couldnt find much about him cos hes still so new but i found this



the link is here

click

he aint that good though....

sorry to hype you all....

[edit]

read it all he is with his own discovered record caled elite fleet productions and he has workied with MC Jin when here was here in AUS

i bet even the rappers in asia are better than him

lol.. he made contact with the legendary Def Jam in Japan...
I know this korean rapper that might be better than him... he's great.. his name is 1TYM (raps in korean.. hecka good)

^BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA 1TYM is a collective group!!! hahahahahaha

ahem....

eric from shinhwa is better tho

HeRe Ma ShiT Ryte HeRe

FaGgots ParaLyzed From My PimP SlaP
Why Do You ThinK thaT ThE HoSPitAls So FuLl NowAdaYs ...
Cuz i'm unLeAshin the ARt Of WaR on YoU DyKes N gays !!
WaTCh YouR MoUth shUt DoWn When The GuN ClaPs
AnD ThE RiBs Open Up WheN thE TriGger SnaPs
f**k WiTH a PsyCho, n yoUr DaughTers NeCk CrAcks
THis Is NOThInG But THe GuTter ShIt To It'S BeSt PoTeNTial
1OuTlAw SpiTin LinEs Of stRaIGht GAnGsTa CredenTial
As Soon As THe NAmE Is heArd, YoU KnOw You LoSe
I'll bE TorTuring YoUr FamIly TrEE, LiKe HiTLer Did to The JeWs
EXecUTioN By gAs, TNT Or A.K ... YoU ChooSe
Be Quick Cus THe GasoLiNe Is LeAKing ... N I'm AbOuT To LiGhT ThE FuSe
My RouTine is Like ... Pull Up, Run Up, SnaTch ThE Mans MonEy N CoKe
ThEn poP EnuFf ShElls tO MaKe hiS fACe LoOk Like a fuKiN egg YoLk
LeT ThE alleyway CaT Nibble On Your PeICe of FlesH
I StriKe bEst when ThE BEEF is FReSH !!!
I'M a Man whO LoVes To eJeCt the LeAd
Put 30 right ThrouGh YoUr FuKin HeAd !!
CoMe In AnY ColouR .. i'M SenDin YoU BAcK ReD
AnD HiGhjAcK ThE AmbuLancE To MakE SuRe The ParAmeDiCs PronOunce You Dead
I ussually JuS ChiLL, BuT All I nEEd Is A PuSh,
N I'll ShOw YoU whAt OsAMa WouLd Do If he GoT hIS HanDs On BuSh

^ it doesnt really flow... and did it take you an hour to write in sticky caps ...unless you pasted it from some where....

it took me 30 mins on microsoft word........so f**k offffff

^awwww im so hurt,,, cant you take criticism?

ah typing up and down hurts my eyes

I cant rap as quick as Twista
Nor can I flow like Ciara
But I got something to say
On this very day
Directly to this lil noob
With the name D-12 $yc0
His public hair looks like Pubic hair
Seems like some wannabe Jerry Curls
Get yo ass back to the salon
And get your hair re-done

Your rhymes are weak
I doubt it will make anyone leak
You seem like some wannabe nigga
Its best you act as a wigga
No one can even read your crap
And you call your sh*t rap?
I bet you got those lines from Ja Rule
And you know Ja is just a plain fool
Just like you

And you typing in sticky caps

Yah….right…
Either you need Jesus or Moses
Or you need to pop them pills for an over-dosage

[/end]


yes..its very corny indeed

Its alright Jason
Kids are doing it all across the nation
Taking things making it as their own
Thing your all Kangsta and hip
Pfft, get a grip
Your just another rip
The battles on
Now its time to take it
Question is, will you be able to make it?
Now, you gotta use your brain
In order to retain
Your one n' only position in this game


I was bored ok...

wow, old topic brought back 0.o
heh. im just watching. >.<

Like I said I was bored, and I had happened to stumble across this topic while searching useless stuff with CB's seach feature. Now, we can have fun and diss Jason without getting in trouble! =D *Cough*Its all fun and games of course *cough*

Maybe, we can bring this game back too. It was pretty cool.

lmfao, hehe. now that he has a bad, erm... rep, i guess this topic has a bit more use to it ^^
anyways, im just continuing to read... heh.