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Deltast0rm
Heya,

I write lyrics for my band's songs - call me a songwriter if you will. I've been looking at some of the content here and I have to say it's very good :) I've been tempted into posting some of my stuff up too.

This is the soft acoustic introduction to one of our tracks - it's not long...


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Can you hear their call?
Without you
They won’t be dead at all,

The drum pounds out the sound
Insipid yet
Still buried in the ground

We slowly slip away
Pray
And on our knees we stay

Rectify the wrong
It’s too late
The justice is long gone…


What do you think?

-Delta
creole
hi dr. Seuss,
Ekay
i like the rhyme scheme and the format. you should post up more.
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