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I had a dream

Last night a had a dream//
That everyone stopped scheming//
And everyone stopped screaming//
Then all the gangsta’s just paused//
And wanted to know the cause//
Why were they killin?//
Maybe to get money for their kids that are illin//
Why they killin another person?//
Just to get some penicillin//
Why are they living this life?//
With only one perspective of life//
Then they thought and said//
“there’s no reason”//
Then seasons changed//
Life went on//
Turned out nothing went wrong since that moment in time//
Crime went down//
Then everyone started to shine//





should i keep goin?

any comments to help my verse would be cool

one
lbjshaq2345
its aight i like where you're goin with it i look forward to the finished version
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