Before she went to bed, she'd brush her teeth and hair,
she'd scrub her face clean, using all her utmost care .
Then she'd look into the mirror, to examine her reflection,
and there her face was bare, wiped clean of all deception .
There drawn upon her face was hurt, all her troubles of the day,
the water had washed the glue of her paste-on smile away .
And her two tired tear-brimmed eyes were looking back at her,
with a voice full of defeat, she whispered to the mirror,
" Dear Mirror, i look at you, and i cant recognize who i see,
with her lifeless expression and dead eyes, could this girl truly be me ? "
And as night went on, she cried herself to sleep,
for throughout her day, she had gone through much grief .
And in the morning, she'd wake up, brush her teeth and hair,
she'd scrub her face clean, using all her utmost care .
She'd take the time to apply make-up, to hide the pain etched on her face,
and as she walked outdoors, she'd make sure her paste-on smile was in place .

thats nicely-written. i can kinda relate =T

I like it..
I can really relate to it..
Good job!

I really really liked this, It was well done. Yeah, I can relate.

I really liked it. I can kind of relate too.

I like it. Appearantly a lot of people can relate, which is always a nice thing.

i think you'd make a fine rapper. =]

Thats reallly really nice. I love how everything just kind of flows.

woww, thats so awesome. just when i thought all the rhyming was gonna ruin it it turned out really great and effective. nice writing!

wow. that's one awesome poem!

very nicely written. it flows well and the concept is nice and relateable. keep it up!

Beautiful. It was very nicely written. One of my personal favorites here.