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akjsd
six letters,
my baby.
five meanings,
my world,
the smile,
my laugh,
tears fall,
better half .
four actions,
quick kiss,
last hug,
pure bliss,
silent vow,
three words,
all true,
two people,
me, you
one heart,
love .


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...2 words per line, is it a poem ? lol . _unsure.gif
yummy_delight
I think it's a poem.

I actually like the format. It's pretty original. The poem itself is really cute. I love it. happy.gif
ApocalypseAelis
I really like this one. :) Especially with the thing you did with going from six to one...that was original. I think it's still a really good poem even with two words per line, and the whole thing flows smoothly when you read it.
_suzie_
aw thats sweet :P nice format btw, it suits it perfectly
..:loveee.NuTTii
I love the format. I wouldn't use strange, just unique. It was very sweet.
yukichan
i like it..especially the format..its very original..
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