akjsd
Jul 20 2005, 01:03 AM
six letters,
my baby.
five meanings,
my world,
the smile,
my laugh,
tears fall,
better half .
four actions,
quick kiss,
last hug,
pure bliss,
silent vow,
three words,
all true,
two people,
me, you
one heart,
love .
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...2 words per line, is it a poem ? lol .
yummy_delight
Jul 20 2005, 02:56 PM
I think it's a poem.
I actually like the format. It's pretty original. The poem itself is really cute. I love it.
ApocalypseAelis
Jul 20 2005, 10:10 PM
I really like this one. :) Especially with the thing you did with going from six to one...that was original. I think it's still a really good poem even with two words per line, and the whole thing flows smoothly when you read it.
_suzie_
Jul 21 2005, 11:15 AM
aw thats sweet :P nice format btw, it suits it perfectly
..:loveee.NuTTii
Jul 21 2005, 04:30 PM
I love the format. I wouldn't use strange, just unique. It was very sweet.
yukichan
Jul 21 2005, 05:54 PM
i like it..especially the format..its very original..
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