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beautiful

Pardon me I had to laugh at that.

You not only lost yourself but you lost your mind in the process.

Yet still it was so artistic the way you added your own forumula to the song.

I give it

Laughing Scale
9/10 laughs.

That was nice.

Concept: 0/10
Writing Ability: 2/10
Flow: 4/10
Overall: 10/10 for laughs.

'yo, you had one chance, by yourself
to undress any female you ever wanted
would you do it or chicken out'

To undress any female you ever wanted? Um.. This is not tasteful writing. You basically took a good concept from Eminem (I know the lyrics, mind you) and turned it into something tasteless. Way to go, brother.

i didnt write it for the rap skills... just for some laughs... i know i cant rap... but twisting and turning thing i make my own way of songs.. so next time i make another "my way" song i should put it in humor...

wait till the my way of "encore" gets posted... now there are the rap skills i consider good...

I tried to rap it..cause it looks like you used the background sound from Emenim...but the words didn't work.. ...but the rhymes were tight...