I wont give up//
Fall down shut up//
I mean down//
Having a frown on my face//
I will just keep going at this steady pace//
Watching people race then crash//
Getting bashed against the wall of life//
Having “wives”, and cheating//
Being deceiving//
So ill be leading//
While everyone is still deceiving//
I may only be 14//
“Hey you’re just another teen!”//
Y’all just being mean//
But I’m not going to give up//
Or fall out//
I have dreams//
Like the games dreams//
And games is my dream//
I will become a soccer player//
So ill think it//
Seize it//
Breath it//
Maintain//
Keep it//
Hold it//
Control it//
And never let go of it//

thats awesome, but i dont really know rap, but good job!

I know don't ever let someone tell you to stop dreaming & face reality...cause sometimes dreams are better than reality...I hope your dreams come true..I'm 14 too & I'm dreamin to be a singer...but I'ma make my dream happen...my name is Morgan Lee..remember it cause one day I'ma be on yur TV screen..(lol)

that reminds me of when i was 14. all i wanted to do was make music , and im doin that right now at 17. hold onto what uve got , NEVER give up - seriously, everythings been against me and look, im here doin it now.

stay real you two.


ps have you got any music uploaded soemwhere that i could listen to?

Wow that was amazing and very moving. I like the spark of defiance. I'd love to actually hear it instead of just reading it.

nice work!

holy shit that was so ill

Wow, that's very emotional and the rhymes and flow go together perfectly. Keep up the good work. We need good rappers on CB.