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laxumaster8
eh, my second blend...sorry about the smallness of the pic...i tryed making more layers...my colors are still a little wacky...and very choppy...rushed a lot and didnt do the hair...constructive critism please...thanks

YourSuperior
That's good, but you need to work on the skin a little bit more... I love the hair. Try doing something more to her eyes, the look naked. Or like they're missing something...
laxumaster8
yeah, i didnt finish the eyes cause i was afraid they would look scary wink.gif
DrSMooTH
its alot better then some of mine. but, try and work on the neck area and the nose. I'm not sure if jen is that dark though, so try and work on the skin tones. the hair's awesome and so are the lips (just tweek them a little). Other than that, thumbs up!!! Thanks for all your comments on mine too!
datass
its nice, (is she naked?) her nose seems a little wierd. wat font is it that u used?
topsyturvy
That's pretty good. I like the shades on her arm. _smile.gif Her face looks a bit podgy on the sides but other than that it's great. happy.gif
laxumaster8
QUOTE(icy_wonderland @ Jul 9 2005, 2:16 AM)
its nice, (is she naked?) her nose seems a little wierd. wat font is it that u used?
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thanks...i used kravitz...
xFaith
Aaah where are the eyes xD its good, work on the skin a bit. nice hair :D
[Mediocre]Artist
O_o is that a choppy butt I see? Smooth it out and vector the hair.
[Scr3amin][Horror]
Try making her skin a lighter tone.
She looks very dark blink.gif
Out then that it looks great _smile.gif
ecargnmyst
wait you didnt vector the hair yet? lol b/c if u did the hair looks awesome. the nose cheek and neck are weird..but other than that its still pretty good
mocassinsx29
It's a bit polygon-ish... Use subtler colors for shading. Nice for 2nd, is she naked?
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