laxumaster8
Jul 9 2005, 12:20 AM
eh, my second blend...sorry about the smallness of the pic...i tryed making more layers...my colors are still a little wacky...and very choppy...rushed a lot and didnt do the hair...constructive critism please...thanks
YourSuperior
Jul 9 2005, 01:09 AM
That's good, but you need to work on the skin a little bit more... I love the hair. Try doing something more to her eyes, the look naked. Or like they're missing something...
laxumaster8
Jul 9 2005, 01:11 AM
yeah, i didnt finish the eyes cause i was afraid they would look scary
DrSMooTH
Jul 9 2005, 01:14 AM
its alot better then some of mine. but, try and work on the neck area and the nose. I'm not sure if jen is that dark though, so try and work on the skin tones. the hair's awesome and so are the lips (just tweek them a little). Other than that, thumbs up!!! Thanks for all your comments on mine too!
datass
Jul 9 2005, 02:16 AM
its nice, (is she naked?) her nose seems a little wierd. wat font is it that u used?
topsyturvy
Jul 9 2005, 03:35 AM
That's pretty good. I like the shades on her arm.

Her face looks a bit podgy on the sides but other than that it's great.
laxumaster8
Jul 9 2005, 06:57 AM
QUOTE(icy_wonderland @ Jul 9 2005, 2:16 AM)
its nice, (is she naked?) her nose seems a little wierd. wat font is it that u used?
thanks...i used kravitz...
xFaith
Jul 9 2005, 06:58 AM
Aaah where are the eyes xD its good, work on the skin a bit. nice hair :D
[Mediocre]Artist
Jul 9 2005, 11:09 AM
O_o is that a choppy butt I see? Smooth it out and vector the hair.
[Scr3amin][Horror]
Jul 9 2005, 12:06 PM
Try making her skin a lighter tone.
She looks very dark
Out then that it looks great
ecargnmyst
Jul 9 2005, 01:02 PM
wait you didnt vector the hair yet? lol b/c if u did the hair looks awesome. the nose cheek and neck are weird..but other than that its still pretty good
mocassinsx29
Jul 10 2005, 09:48 AM
It's a bit polygon-ish... Use subtler colors for shading. Nice for 2nd, is she naked?
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