edited.

honestly kid, i aint that bad.

i thought you said you told KC to quit writing your raps.

...Last one

I liked Verse 2, the rest of it was alright I guess.

it aint bad actually, but u didnt write it so...

it's funny cuz in all ur other raps, u talk about the ho's and ur kangstaness. and this one it says how u should be a influential rolemodel and all that.

if it was me, i really wouldnt feel that proud of my self .
I'd feel like i traced a picture and claimed it as my own.
but thats just me. its good though i wonder how it would sound.
and ur tellin the kc guy not to write ur rymes anymore so good for u.

OMG..... that's a lot of difficult words you used. which makes the rap lyric make it sound better. anyways yeah i like this even though i like songs that relates to killing, murder! hehe. but oh wells. anyways...nice.

KC didn't write verse 4 though and I actually like that verse.

That's wow. I love the lyrics. Cool. :)

You need to put spectacular on the track.

<--------Spectacular

Nice lyrics Kangsta.

QUOTE

[Chorus]
i giving you something thats intellectual
Something far away from the songs that are sexual

okay... so what about that duet with miss nga? Kangsta Luvin', I think it was called. i'd say that was pretty sexual. and FAR from intellectual.

you contradict yourself. and i highly doubt that you wrote that yourself.