Summer Dreams

You feel the last days of
Summer that linger on
In the cool night breeze
As the days of summer fade into the pass
Walking into the shadows of a lonely starless night
Alone with unspoken thoughts of the eternal pass
Loneliness crumbles under your steps as you
Stretch forward to heaven’s light
But only to find nothing
You feel cheated from existence
Emptiness haunts within you
As you disappeared from my summer dream

By//Liz

[did this in skool... I was bored ]

Not bad, not bad. Something about it just really tugs at me.

I give it 2 thumbs, 1 toe, a shoulder, and an ear up ^_^

It's reminds me of soft summer breezes (haha, that was obvious). Such a nice poem, I say go for it. Try some more poems, and who knows? It might make it in the cB's newspaper issue.
Good luck.

submitted it 2 da cb newpaper thang lol thxs 4 reminding mee lol

sort of warm poem, botanic life. i love nature's seasons.