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Torn edges around the details
Failure written upon her face.
Tears indicate everything that fails
What happened to her grace?
There has always been a hint of sad.
Always being known as the disgrace.
For everything she was ever known for, it was nothing but a had.
give her a penny, she'll give you a dime.
Now tell me why would you would let her go?



Short and sweet. i wrote it when i was like really depressed. but yea. I think it's still ok? comments opinions please.
RockizLife
Wow, I like it! Very good! I could kinda feel what she was feeling. Keep up the good work!
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