Silence and darkness surrounded me as I panicked with fright -- it wasn't the fear of dark, really, it was the fear of not knowing, not knowing what secrets and mysteries laid beneath the dark. I could hear damp footsteps comign towards me, nearer and nearer .. I shivered with fright and my blood froze as I felt another's dead cold hand start to inch closer behind me. For the first time in my life, I felt this... indescribable feeling, like the feeling you get when you've lost a loved one, mixed in with terror. I could sense someone's presence behind my back, but I was too terrified to turn around. I stayed as still as I could, breathing through my mouth, trying to make the least possible sound. My heart throbbed faster than ever in my life. A tear ran down my cheek as I stood there motionless, hoping the mysterious presence behind me would go away -- but it's didn't. Suddenly, I felt a sharp pain run through my back. I collasped onto the ground, bending over, blood pouring out of my mouth onto the graffittied ground. Painful thoughts replayed like a film in my head..

That's all I wrote. ><
I guess there's too much 'emphasize' in this one, haha, but I wrote this a long time ago out of boredom..

Wow..it's really dark. I like the imagery. Nice work.

Thanks!

Good!!!! (^____^) I want to read more!!!! Yay!!!

WOAH I LOVE THE SUSPENSE!! The end is really creepy, but cool! It'd make a cool story =D

Yes, this seems like a really good beginning to a story so far. Please continue!