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I am walking while birds are talking,
While thoughts of you flow so,
Briskly through my veins…
Take two looks at me,
Double take, you see?
What’s this penchant you’ve,
Chained tightly to me?

When the trepidation’s gone, will you be there?
Vivacity elsewhere, exhilaration away…
When the initial brush of lips is done,
You’ll be right here, I pray…

Double take once more as I move on,
The first night’s come and past,
Now the hurdle’s here…
When your hands met mine, so,
Transcendental, such,
Superhuman grace…
Unremitting love…

When the trepidation’s gone, will you be there?
Vivacity elsewhere, exhilaration away…
When the initial brush of lips is done,
You’ll be right here, I pray…

Final double take, once for good measure,
Over my shoulder, your eyes laser mine,
It sends quivers down my spine…
Take your time, darling,
There’s no urgency,
Just two fools in love,
To make beautiful mistakes…

When the trepidation’s gone, will you be there?
Vivacity elsewhere, exhilaration away…
When the initial brush of lips is done,
You’ll be right here, I pray…
stephinika
beautiful. absolutely beautiful. your use of words and imagery is amazing.
Azarel
You have a way with words, my love, you really do. Utterly beautiful.
HiddenSmile
Very nice.
HiddenSmile
Whoops, accidentall posted twice, nice vocabulary btw!
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