She steps and spring springs from her step.
As soon as I saw her my heart lept.
The most beautiful thing I'd ever saw,
That type of beauty should be against the law.
I'd seen girls before, but none like this,
I just hope I don't get totally dissed.
I stutter when I talk o her.
Eveyrone else just becomes a blure.
Her hair flows like a dark brown sea,
Her eyes so bright I can barely see.
Should I ask her to the dance or not?
She sure seems to like that other guy alot.
I'm just worried that she'll say no,
Well, here I go!


Hope you guys like this!!! (I <3 poetry!!!)

I like it. It flows well and it's really cute.

'Her hair flows like a dark brown sea,
Her eyes so bright I can barely see.'

Love that line.

'The most beautiful thing I'd ever saw,
That type of beauty should be against the law.'

The most beautiful thing I'd ever saw seen.

That sentence was grammatically incorrect and the only major flaw.

heh. nice poem, reminds me of how im feeling now.

Off topic, but the title, "About a Girl," is also the name of a song by Nirvana (from their first album, Bleach).

Wow, thats good I like it!