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im gonna leave
before i go
theres time to fail
before you grow
growth is a state of mind...
growing down
to the roots
or up where leaves dapple light
you have to forget before you can know
dancin on a sunbeam
to be immature
for a day
beats growth for a year
hands down
down to the ground
laugh and forget
doncha wanna know?
no?
rock a bye baby
on the tree tops
higher than me;
a child
look up to the child
growin down to te ground
six foot down
ItzOnlySydney
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Jun 11 2005, 6:53 AM)
you have to forget before you can know
dancin on a sunbeam
to be immature
for a day
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that's my favorite part.

it kind of reminds me of something my friend lizzie once said "childhood should be a J O U R N E Y not a R A C E"

and as for the poem i really liked it it was very interesting
stephinika
james, i love what you write. i really like the concept behind this one. nice work again. _smile.gif
aznlyka
wow, reminds me of my layout...

nice work
RiddleMeWonders
your words have such color james. that's one of the biggest things I love about your writing.

QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice)
growing down
to the roots
or up where leaves dapple light
you have to forget before you can know
dancin on a sunbeam
to be immature
for a day
beats growth for a year
hands down
down to the ground
laugh and forget


I can see it. throb.gif
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