Full Version: can't if he's dead
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good job *sniff* :[
aww thats sad..
good poem though :)
good poem though :)
Omg that is really good, in a way it reminds me of Star wars 3, when Pamde' dies.
QUOTE(iNyCxShoRT @ Jun 10 2005, 9:16 PM)
Omg that is really good, in a way it reminds me of Star wars 3, when Pamde' dies.
Eek. Thanks for telling. I haven't seen the movie. Actually, my friend told me that anyway.
That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending.
QUOTE(AkaRyux @ Jun 10 2005, 10:21 PM)
Eek. Thanks for telling. I haven't seen the movie. Actually, my friend told me that anyway.
That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending.
That's really good, but you probably could do better with word choice. And if you think about it, this girl's really overreacting. Otherwise, you did a good job and the rhyming is really good and flows well. I like the ending.
haha, thanks . and no , i'm not overreacting . if you're dating a guy like mine, you'll need to kno if he's safe all the time , cuz he could get hurt anytime . fricking G T-T
awww it's so touching. but sad at the same time. hug? *hugs*
wow...so sad... 
i like it though..good job..
i like it though..good job..
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