my first try on advertising..

i submit this to a skateboard contest.. =)

comments and critix are welcome =)

it's nice, but also kind of plain

It's all right..I would suggest adding an effect to it...vectoring it would be make it more original...maybe add a border around it? The torn edges border?

It's a nice start.

its nice for a simple ad, but the simple look works i think. nice work.

Simple does work. Its nice. I like it.