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Paradox of Life
Haven't written much lately...

Catfight

Ablaze with cold fury,
These two gleaming eyes,
Staring at two others,
Two he did despise,

Their tails upright and tense,
Their fur like needle tips,
Their sharp teeth bared, their weapons,
Like poison, saliva drips,

Feline brows are furrowed,
Staring each other down,
No game, no sign of merriment,
Bloodthirsty, malicious frowns,

Then one leapt at the other,
A hiss, a scratch, a growl,
A feline yowl of agony,
A sound so very foul,

The dust arising from the bricks,
Bloodstains on the tile,
One is lying on the ground,
The victor adorns a smile.

"Let this be a lesson,
My silly former rival
We are strays, no rules, you see?
I'm better fit survival."

Constructive critisizm appreciated. _smile.gif
loljuliana
i like it. nice choice of description <- did that make sense?

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The dust arising from the bricks,
Bloodstains on the tile,
One is lying on the ground,
The victor adorns a smile


^ my favorite part
stephinika
nice. i like your descriptions and whatnot. great work. thumbsup.gif
ItzOnlySydney
great imagery =).


btw isn't there a song named this??
Paradox of Life
Thanks for posting and I googled it. Catfight is the name of a band and a video game. blink.gif
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