This poem is another love poem, untitled. Title suggestions would be much appreciated. Not one of my strong poems, just thought I would share though. I kind of wanted to make a new style of poem. Syllables from 9 to 1. Copyright to me: Mari. Lol.

He was the one who opened my heart
He was the one who broke it too
"I love you" I say, my part,
His reply, "I not you."
Ran fast as I bailed
My heart then failed
As I heard
That word
Love

"one person, one word"?


eh...pretty bad hmm "4 letters of tragedy"?

ehh i am going to stop trying but i love the poem very short and sweet it sounds like it should be a song =)

i like it..its nice and short..good job!

Thanks.

lol! that made me laugh i dunno why...sorry =P
nice job though! :)

it really started to fall apart towards the end..then shattered...but i love he beginning

Any suggestions then to fix the end? And thanks for the feedback.