deviate
and celebrate
demand recognition
faceless masses cheer
faceless idols
thoughtlessness abounds
think for the sake of thought
for the sake of the dreamers
the screamers
standing in the centre
all eyes turned away
till one turns
society burns
plague of toads?
croaking in the dark, shitty gutters?
or a red rose grown
from rotten leaves trodden to soil
fresh turned loam sprouts growth
turn the soil.
plant the seed
fear is for the cowards
obvious?
you talk shit like its poetry
those faceless masses think its art
because it rhymes
free form feeling flows
from fiery flights of fancy
f**k it, i dont care
about the rhymes
assonance and discord
stream from the mouth of the one with a face
standing in the centre
with all eyes turned away
they'll turn

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hmm... its been a while since i've written anything.. i like this

*Jumps and hugs you nodding, laughing*

James... I love the attitude and ...just everything

I love your free-form style James.
This was a wonderful piece.

lol rebel

very nice! i love how you write james. great work as always.

haha, very nicely done

I agree with RiddleMeWonders, the attitude gives it a nice edge

why thank you, everybody

= )

haha james you're so special. plague of the toads, wtf? lol but seriously...

i really liked your poem. i thought it was so very you =).i just wish the "eff it" part wasn't there =/

That's so good, you could be a rapper.

Hahaha

KATHLEEN THAT ROCKS.

SO gonna do that

thats awesome! i thought you were going to mention plague of toads just onee more time...like towards the end >_< that line is what really caught my interest halfway through the poem and kept me reading. Its great, but i don't like the random bouts of rhyming too much

Wow, that was so "out there". It's awesome! I agree with Kathleen, you could so totally be a rapper. You have that "style". Great job.