i'm not really good at writing poems.. and i dont write them often..but i got a lil irritated.. and sad..so i wrote one.. comments and criticism please.. its sorta free form
Untitled - Maybe you can give it a name
i've gone through all this, yet i'm still here with you.
it's all been a fake lies,
through all your charades,
it was just a pathetic try...
i don't know why i continue to listen to you
to let your thoughts seep into my mind
dwelling there, letting it interfere with my focus
it all becomes one blurry wet tear drop
cant you tell im burning up inside
all i wanted was for you to notice me
you pretend im not there when you're around your friends
im THAT embarrassing...
and when you finally chance a glance,
im down in tears with a red eyes
so unbearable to look at
you ask me whats wrong?
i tell you nothing and you dont believe me..
you try and try to get to the bottom of it
but i wont tell you whats been there in me
because what YOU dont know, wont hurt YOU
i guess i cant bring myself to hurt you
no matter how much i can be torn up inside
ill be with you to the end
maybe then ill find my life glowing
with a happiness, bright red