Tralalalalala


As the pulsating beads of water
Hit my bare skin
All that has gone wrong today
Seems to melt away

My hands caress
Every inch of my steamy body
Slowly I begin to relax
Everything will be allright

Those 30 minutes
Are priceless
It is the one place that is mine
My safe haven

Each minute spent
Feels like an eternity
An eternity of happiness
As my pain drips down the drain

I like it a lot. In a way to me its kinda true. Great work. =]

Very nice, totally relatable. I just had a hot shower cuz I was feelin down

...you take thirty minute showers ?

^ haha that's what i was thinking.

good job. great imagery. and very relateable lol.

Nothing like a nice warm shower. I like it.

Of course dear!! I need some time to clear my head. Most of it is just standing under the water like...relaxing haha

i take 30 minute showers too. i can clear my head in the shower. i dont mean to take so long...time goes by fast.

ohh to remain on topic...this is really good. i can dig it!

Those are my kind of showers... lol I like taking long showers since.. well.. you get a lot of alone time with water. Nice poem.. It describes details well.

Haha yeah. Long showers are relaxing. Nice poem, Rachel. It's definitely very relatable.

lmao, i love doing that ! .. my sister tells for hogging the bathroom so long. =[ .. but i always find time for it.

nice poem

lol yeah you tell yourself one more minute....and then you can't help but stay longer

Nice poem great job!

My dad yells at me to get out if I am in more than 10 minutes. But when I'm at college, I take them as long as I possibly can.

Nice poem, though. Very relaxing...not as relaxing as a warm shower, but thinking about one sure is nice.

Wow, that's really good. It's written really well and I like how it ends. Nice free verse.

Rachel, dear, you just made me have dirty thoughts about you in the shower.

Ha. Ha. Ha.

But seriously. That's a great poem, m'dear. You certainly do have a way with words, love.