impression
of depression
quick succession
rapid blows to the side of the head
dead
down
out
in
out
in
out
shake it all about
turn the f**k around
and start again
in the ashes
of your passion
ofyou cash in
the cheque
bounced
so pay again
cause life wont take an IOU
deserve it preserve it
not worth it
deep as the surface
still waters
run
nowhere

*****

hmm... im not entirely convinced...

james, ilu. seriously. everything you write seems to flow and come together so well.

why thank you... i think its b/c i just make most stuff up as i type it into the computer... its just the way my mind fits together

= )

i rather like it now that i read it a second time. not my favorite piece, tho