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Statistik

May 3 2005, 10:37 PM

Not copied. I promise. Enjoy..hope i get good remarks this TIME

KANGSTA! HAHA!!!! HISTORY IN DA MAKIN U MOTHA f**kers!!
I will admit last rap I used a line from Cassidy
Im a hustla so is that any reason for you to start Harassing me
You CB haters can hate but you no its all good
I will hit you so hard you will see more stars than hollywood
Im like a nightmare 4 those who oppose my style
Give you the Midas touch so call me the Golden Child
Just call me trident because your girl can chew on this
Do you like death and make you cease to exist
Its me people I stand tall and stand firm
And do you like voters and eliminate you like a president going for his second term
Its so FUN with those who I STUN
Because they say I suck and im DONE but yet continue to RESPOND
NOPE! Im superb and bring fire like a gun
My flow is so spectacular like a taser that it will leave you stunned
So im going to continue to just do it like NIKE
Those who say they hate me know they really LIKE ME
Its me Jason I got it locked MOS DEF
And if you don’t feel this then you ain’t feeling yourself

Im So Vain

May 3 2005, 10:39 PM

nice. keep doin what you do. and just always remember to stay original. as for the haters, just brush em off.

sikdragon

May 3 2005, 10:55 PM

exactly

sikdragon

May 3 2005, 10:57 PM

yeah i aint feeling on myself. ya girl doin it for me.

nightmare4taki

May 4 2005, 04:55 PM

OMG Jason you killed this one man. Unbelievable.

QUOTE

You CB haters can hate but you no its all good
I will hit you so hard you will see more stars than hollywood

That is the coldest line i have heard anyone rap on CB

QUOTE

Just call me trident because your girl can chew on this
Do you like death and make you cease to exist

The Trident line was just unexpected but very brilliant

QUOTE

Its me Jason I got it locked MOS DEF
And if you don’t feel this then you ain’t feeling yourself

That was Nasty

Way to come back Jason. You Never give up no matter how many people criticize. Keep doing your thing.

*B5'zMami4Lyphe*

May 4 2005, 05:03 PM

Better than your other one.

videogamsta

May 4 2005, 05:35 PM

i gotta say this is the best rap you wrote gj

xquizit

May 4 2005, 06:02 PM

where'd u steal these lines from?

*goes to investigate*

Statistik

May 4 2005, 06:06 PM

I DIDNT..

azn_r4pf4n

May 4 2005, 07:46 PM

ur perservence is amazing.

not_your_average

May 4 2005, 08:24 PM

QUOTE(xquizit @ May 4 2005, 6:02 PM)

where'd u steal these lines from?

*goes to investigate*

haha, roxy, you never cease to speak for me...

HongKongDong

May 4 2005, 08:31 PM

Damn... that was actually pretty good. Like KC said those lines just killed... props kid props

basick

May 4 2005, 08:34 PM

not as good as yall say it is... even if it wasnt bitten

Paradox of Life

May 4 2005, 08:52 PM

Wow, that was okay, but it's probably because I'm comparing it to all your other terrible rhymes. I googled it and it seems like you didn't copy off someone for a change. For some reason though, it seems like too miraculous a comeback. Did someone write this for you? It seems more literate than you usually write too and about 50x better. How could possibly do this good in the short time it was since your last topic? And there's nowhere near as much hostility. Hmmm...

x LUV x ALWAYS x

May 4 2005, 11:17 PM

this was okay i guess. never really read your other ones, and this one isn't that bad.

i gotta say ive seen the critique on your other ones though, and im surprised that you're still writing these persistently.

xquizit

May 5 2005, 09:02 AM

QUOTE(AkaRyux @ May 4 2005, 8:52 PM)

Wow, that was okay, but it's probably because I'm comparing it to all your other terrible rhymes. I googled it and it seems like you didn't copy off someone for a change. For some reason though, it seems like too miraculous a comeback. Did someone write this for you? It seems more literate than you usually write too and about 50x better. How could possibly do this good in the short time it was since your last topic? And there's nowhere near as much hostility. Hmmm...

Yeah, I don't buy it either. Come on Jason, you can't fool us.

yummy_delight

May 5 2005, 07:05 PM

wow. so much better than all the other crap you posted.

that trident line was classic. i'm impressed now.

although the skeptics are making me a tad suspicious... good job.

HongKongDong

May 5 2005, 07:33 PM

QUOTE(AkaRyux @ May 4 2005, 8:52 PM)

Wow, that was okay, but it's probably because I'm comparing it to all your other terrible rhymes. I googled it and it seems like you didn't copy off someone for a change. For some reason though, it seems like too miraculous a comeback. Did someone write this for you? It seems more literate than you usually write too and about 50x better. How could possibly do this good in the short time it was since your last topic? And there's nowhere near as much hostility. Hmmm...

Hmm... yeah I was thinking the exact same thing, maybe someone did write it for him. I mean, it is way better then all his other bull. . . googled it, yahood it and came up with nothing... just way too suspicious

sikdragon

May 5 2005, 07:49 PM

someone should check kalistyle.

loljuliana

May 10 2005, 06:19 PM

even though you didnt bite off anything from the internet. .
i have a hard time believing that you wrote it. o_O
it just doesnt sound like anything that you would write

dispn0ygonekrazy

May 11 2005, 12:20 AM

QUOTE(Jason61992 @ May 3 2005, 7:37 PM)

Not copied. I promise. Enjoy..hope i get good remarks this TIME

KANGSTA! HAHA!!!! HISTORY IN DA MAKIN U MOTHA f**kers!!
I will admit last rap I used a line from Cassidy
Im a hustla so is that any reason for you to start Harassing me
^^ok opener
You CB haters can hate but you no its all good
I will hit you so hard you will see more stars than hollywood
^^ LOL good line
Im like a nightmare 4 those who oppose my style
Give you the Midas touch so call me the Golden Child
^^ word it better
Just call me trident because your girl can chew on this
Do you like death and make you cease to exist
^^strong line
Its me people I stand tall and stand firm
And do you like voters and eliminate you like a president going for his second term
^^its ok
Its so FUN with those who I STUN
Because they say I suck and im DONE but yet continue to RESPOND
^^ hah true personnal
NOPE! Im superb and bring fire like a gun
My flow is so spectacular like a taser that it will leave you stunned
^^ aiight
So im going to continue to just do it like NIKE
Those who say they hate me know they really LIKE ME
^^ ok
Its me Jason I got it locked MOS DEF
And if you don’t feel this then you ain’t feeling yourself
^^ your closer wasnt as strong as ur other lines

well people here are still tryin to look for if ur sh*t is copied but if yah didnt then its all good..XD hah this doode never gives up looks like ur provin them wrong good sh*t

FoOd

May 11 2005, 12:29 AM

Well I commend you on your perseverence.

It was ehhh, but it was ok. Keep trying!

heyyfrankie

May 11 2005, 04:15 PM

no...just no.

..:loveee.NuTTii

May 11 2005, 07:19 PM

QUOTE

where'd u steal these lines from?

*goes to investigate*

u still gotta win over roxanne

As for me, I'm very impressed by your spirit. Nothing puts you down. *does paula abdul clap* You've made quite an improvement.

jnukes

May 11 2005, 10:11 PM

QUOTE(basick @ May 4 2005, 5:34 PM)

not as good as yall say it is... even if it wasnt bitten

i agree ..

anyone can think up punchlines .. but APPLYING IT to yourself as a rapper and your personality is more difficult ..