Time to unleash my new dope track//
wish we hope to bring back 2pac//
i do things that no one can do//
it might not be clear, but ill make it true//
more money problems thats true.//
cuz the more money i make is a problem for you!//
suprised that you people never knew//
why, ill make your mic expell//
cuz all you do is spit on da mic to rebel//
pass years in freestylin, ive excelled//
you dont belong here, just go die in hell//
Full Version: rap *new*
Umm... how pleasant.
"Dope" Track. Hahahaha.
"Dope" Track. Hahahaha.
powerful words from a small ass wigga-
you wishin you knew the truth, which is bigga-
your insecurity is your downfall-
cuz your lines barely rhyme at all-
nobody feelin ya shit-
cuz ya less than shit when ya spit-
your mama wishin just a little more than a little bit-
that her fat ass woulda done aborted it-
the slop that ya fake ass brings to the table-
has enabled me to take a stab, and dip the gravy ladle-
you cooked fried and burnt, your sloppy rhymes,
just been served-
you wishin you knew the truth, which is bigga-
your insecurity is your downfall-
cuz your lines barely rhyme at all-
nobody feelin ya shit-
cuz ya less than shit when ya spit-
your mama wishin just a little more than a little bit-
that her fat ass woulda done aborted it-
the slop that ya fake ass brings to the table-
has enabled me to take a stab, and dip the gravy ladle-
you cooked fried and burnt, your sloppy rhymes,
just been served-
2-pac, the a is an ahh sound like the 'o' in log.
" you dont belong here, just go die in hell// "
you cant die in hell. your already dead...
you cant die in hell. your already dead...
That was a nice rap although you bit a line from Cassidy and reprashed it.
Jason- rap *new*
more money problems thats true.//
cuz the more money i make is a problem for you!//
Cassidy - Im a hustla
more money more problems is true//
cause the more money i make the more problems for you//
Jason- rap *new*
more money problems thats true.//
cuz the more money i make is a problem for you!//
Cassidy - Im a hustla
more money more problems is true//
cause the more money i make the more problems for you//
GIVE IT UP ! PLEASE ! I BEG U ! SPARE US ALL !
1. True and True don't rhyme.
2. As stated by nightmare4taki, you stole lyrics
3. As stated by sikdragon, 2 pac and track don't rhyme.
4. As stated by Angel_Cece, you can't die in hell.
5.
Definitions of expel:
verb: as from a country
verb: put out or expel from a place
Example: "The child was expelled from the classroom"
verb: eliminate, as of bodily substances
verb: cause to flee
verb: remove from office
5a. Expell isn't a word, but expel is (omg, I'm Spelling Bee champ).
5b. A mic cannot expel or be expeled
6. 'i do things that no one can do//' I suppose you can, like posting 17 raps when all you get is negative feedback and still not get any better.
Just summing things up for you.
2. As stated by nightmare4taki, you stole lyrics
3. As stated by sikdragon, 2 pac and track don't rhyme.
4. As stated by Angel_Cece, you can't die in hell.
5.
Definitions of expel:
verb: as from a country
verb: put out or expel from a place
Example: "The child was expelled from the classroom"
verb: eliminate, as of bodily substances
verb: cause to flee
verb: remove from office
5a. Expell isn't a word, but expel is (omg, I'm Spelling Bee champ).
5b. A mic cannot expel or be expeled
6. 'i do things that no one can do//' I suppose you can, like posting 17 raps when all you get is negative feedback and still not get any better.
Just summing things up for you.
you're dumb.
:puke:
:puke:
Jason we went over this
You suck at it
Please quit while your ahead
Hell, just stay in bed
Rapping is not your "thing"
You ain't got nothing to bring.
I just pwned you and I'm white
I hope we laugh at this all night.
*Bows*
You suck at it
Please quit while your ahead
Hell, just stay in bed
Rapping is not your "thing"
You ain't got nothing to bring.
I just pwned you and I'm white
I hope we laugh at this all night.
*Bows*
^^ LOL !!
I agree with what AkaRyux said.
I agree with what AkaRyux said.
very good, very very good.
PSYCH!
okay honestly, "rhyming" true with true?
PSYCH!
okay honestly, "rhyming" true with true?
I`m gonna be a copycat and follow crazyjew
The person that sucks the most has to be you
come on; you thought true
rhymed with true
I just might suck
as bad as you do;
but its okay because i don`t overuse the word foo;
hahahah..okay i`m bored.
The person that sucks the most has to be you
come on; you thought true
rhymed with true
I just might suck
as bad as you do;
but its okay because i don`t overuse the word foo;
hahahah..okay i`m bored.
Jesus f**king christ jason.
Do i need to go to your Non-ghetto suburb house and rip out your f**king keyboard just to get the f**king message through your f**king head?
YOU f**king STEAL EVERYTHING.
YOU f**king DISGRACE EVERYTHING THAT IS ANYTHING.
JUST STOP TRYING AND PICK UP A NEW f**king HOBBY.
LAST TIME I HEARD POKEMON AND YU-GI-OH WAS STILL POPULAR FOR 12 YEAR OLD DUMBASSES, WHO HAVEN'T GOTTON TO THE PUBERTY SECTION IN THEIR HEALTH CLASS. (sorry for the caps)
Do i need to go to your Non-ghetto suburb house and rip out your f**king keyboard just to get the f**king message through your f**king head?
YOU f**king STEAL EVERYTHING.
YOU f**king DISGRACE EVERYTHING THAT IS ANYTHING.
JUST STOP TRYING AND PICK UP A NEW f**king HOBBY.
LAST TIME I HEARD POKEMON AND YU-GI-OH WAS STILL POPULAR FOR 12 YEAR OLD DUMBASSES, WHO HAVEN'T GOTTON TO THE PUBERTY SECTION IN THEIR HEALTH CLASS. (sorry for the caps)
sigh..
why do u continue to do this?
if u r going to make something like this, at least make it so it makes sense and its original..
why do u continue to do this?
if u r going to make something like this, at least make it so it makes sense and its original..
if it doesnt make sense to you, dont reply.
Actually, saying something doesn't make sense would be constructive criticizm to help the author make his message more clear.
it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people. rap hasnt different rules. It's not exactly poetry.
QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 2 2005, 5:47 PM)
powerful words from a small ass wigga-
you wishin you knew the truth, which is bigga-
your insecurity is your downfall-
cuz your lines barely rhyme at all-
nobody feelin ya shit-
cuz ya less than shit when ya spit-
your mama wishin just a little more than a little bit-
that her fat ass woulda done aborted it-
the slop that ya fake ass brings to the table-
has enabled me to take a stab, and dip the gravy ladle-
you cooked fried and burnt, your sloppy rhymes,
just been served-
you wishin you knew the truth, which is bigga-
your insecurity is your downfall-
cuz your lines barely rhyme at all-
nobody feelin ya shit-
cuz ya less than shit when ya spit-
your mama wishin just a little more than a little bit-
that her fat ass woulda done aborted it-
the slop that ya fake ass brings to the table-
has enabled me to take a stab, and dip the gravy ladle-
you cooked fried and burnt, your sloppy rhymes,
just been served-
Mother f*cker you rock!! So very true. Now that is a rhyme!
QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 3 2005, 5:14 PM)
it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people. rap hasnt different rules. It's not exactly poetry.
rap IS poetry.
you cannot deny this fact.
QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 3 2005, 4:14 PM)
it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people. rap hasnt different rules. It's not exactly poetry.
Rap stands for Rhythm and Poetry.
thanks.
WHAT part of not exactly poetry dont you understand?
WHAT part of not exactly poetry dont you understand?
what part of rap is poetry don't you understand...
Poetry - writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm
http://www.m-w.com
??!!
Poetry - writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm
http://www.m-w.com
??!!
sikdragon i dont know if your rap was spose to be a reply to jasons but it was aight.
it was.
rap is not exactly poetry. yeah it has rythm and expresses emotion, but so does banging on a drum. rap has different rules and different critiques. it's like saying a square is a rectangle. when in fact the measurments and proportion are completely different.
QUOTE
what part of rap is poetry don't you understand...
Poetry - writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm
http://www.m-w.com
??!!
Poetry - writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm
http://www.m-w.com
??!!
rap is not exactly poetry. yeah it has rythm and expresses emotion, but so does banging on a drum. rap has different rules and different critiques. it's like saying a square is a rectangle. when in fact the measurments and proportion are completely different.
you guys, c'mon! don't stop, jason. you'll get a beatdown.. eventually. 
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