cant i learn...
two feet firm
on nothing
race to nothing
rat race to nothing
piss it away
burn it down
all fall down
Down
20,000 leagues under
the
see
me
run
see
spot
run
manic depressive
giggling with the needle in his arm
smile reflected in tears
heroin of isolation
addiction
to friction
supersition
dont rhyme
half rhyme
half beat
miss a beat
-
policemen beat
down the dreams
blazing guns
burning sun
the victory
aint to be won
its not a game
play the game
its not a game
play again
try again
game over

Good Lord James, I FREAKIN LOVE IT! I love how crazy it is but still all flows <3<3 Rawr you are amazing.

I want to go to London and visit you

any time you'r ein england, we will meet up, promise

thanks! *blush*

kind of confusing...i don't really understand the whole concept is it supposed to be a rap? looks like it.

Wow James, that really was amazing.

INTENSE

and this line was one of the ones that really got me...



You know I hate needles. This line added a bit more to the...psychotic character of the poem.

I LOVE IT!

*faints*

*wakes up* I LOVE JAMES. *faints again*

20/10

no... its about feeling totally insane.... and then realizing you have to laugh, b/c if you dont, you'll die... and you're gonna die anyway, so why be depressed about it.

and that there's no point in existing, but we all do it anway. because theres nothing else worth doing

*Glomps James*
I'm going to rape you this summer. So beware.

pssh... you cant rape the willing

wow. thats fantastic. lol your sucha luva boy. everyone loves you! keep up the writting.

NOT everyone loves James...lol...

Don't look at me...i adore him...

Hahahaha. James is, like, THE cB pimp. All the girls go crazy for him. I guess I'd have to be in that group, too.

But anyway, I forgot to mention that James, you're a genius. I absolutely love it. Brilliance.

I guess I was a bit confused, but it makes more sense now and I've learned to like this poem. ^_^; I like these lines:

'giggling with the needle in his arm
smile reflected in tears
heroin of isolation'

It's a really good combination of so many ideas and how they rhyme. Great job, as always.

Yeah.. Appearantly all the girls like you o_O; I think you're pretty kewl. I wish there were more people like you in my town. I NEED TO GO TO ENGLAND >_<

fabulous james, absolutely brilliant. its so unorganized yet so flowing and it just works. i loved it.

WOW! speachless