LiLaZnGirL122
Apr 29 2005, 12:17 AM
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One night a guy and girl was driving home from the movies the boy sensed there was something wrong becuz of the painful silence they shared between them that night the boy pulled over becuz hewated to talk he told that his feelings had changed and that it was time time move on a silent tear slid down her cheek as he slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note at the moment ad drunk driver was speeding down that very same street he swerved right into the drivers seat, killing the girl, mieraculosly, the boy survived remembering the note, he pulled it out and read it "without your love, I would die"
some ppl might have read thos before
EXPLO5ION
Apr 29 2005, 01:23 AM
hmm.. somewhat ironic.. but thats still sad.
I can't stand the fact that it has no punctuation marks, whatsoever.
I had to re-read it several times.
yukichan
Apr 29 2005, 02:26 AM
aww..thats sad..
KissMe2408
Apr 29 2005, 02:29 AM
Wow that really is sad =( Ironic, like simplicty said, but sad. My heart started hurting when i got to the, "my feelings have changed" part.
Maybe this should go into the writing forum, i've read other stories like this in there.
and yah that is kinda weird that there are no punctuation marks whatsoever, maybe you should fix that lol.
toodlepops.
Apr 29 2005, 04:47 AM
QUOTE(simplicityxx @ Apr 29 2005, 1:23 AM)
I can't stand the fact that it has no punctuation marks, whatsoever.
I had to re-read it several times.
Agreed.
Yeah, kinda sad too.
crashingg
Apr 29 2005, 09:07 AM
awww i read this before and it's sad every single time i read it =(
misoshiru
Apr 29 2005, 09:32 AM
aww...that's so sad. but yeah, it should be either in the writing forum or the relationship forum i think.
xMayleex
Apr 29 2005, 11:26 AM
It was kinda sad
f0nx
Apr 29 2005, 12:35 PM
Stories like that creep me out
dreamerOi
Apr 29 2005, 12:40 PM
gak! it made me sad and yea it was pretty ironic
AngelTears
Apr 29 2005, 12:46 PM
Very Ironic..
But still sad..
Love sucks, dont it?
Fallen_Fairy
Apr 29 2005, 01:03 PM
i saw this on a myspace bulletin, it made me sigh
loljuliana
Apr 29 2005, 01:19 PM
wow. .that's sad and ironic. and yeah, i had to read it over a couple times because of the puncuation (sp?).
iNyCxShoRT
Apr 29 2005, 01:25 PM
oh man i read that on my friends xanga before and that is so sad. but that`s realy ironic and scary at the same time o_O
Teesa
Apr 29 2005, 01:28 PM
what a sad story.
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silent tear slid down her cheek as she slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note
first I thought the guy passed her a note..
yeseulx3
Apr 29 2005, 01:33 PM
the terrible grammar kinda ruins the whole "sad" mood...
Heathasm
Apr 29 2005, 01:37 PM
haha :( i regret reading this topic now it totally has changed my content and relaxed mood
multifaceted
Apr 29 2005, 01:49 PM
that was kinda ironic in a way that it became disturbing to me
Shattered_Hope
Apr 29 2005, 06:52 PM
It's a sad story...but the grammar ruined some parts in it...
sharerol
Apr 29 2005, 06:53 PM
Wow, that is sad.
But...why are people all of a sudden starting to post these random sad stories? x_X
jennyjenny
Apr 29 2005, 06:57 PM
There are a lot of sad stories. I know plenty. But yes, it was sad nonetheless. But it needs better grammar. I didn't really get it.
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as he slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note
why would the guy reach into the girl's pocket when he's driving?
dahding
Apr 29 2005, 07:21 PM
man, that was poorly written. had to read it a couple of times to get it. it's sad, but ironic. love bites u in the ass doesn't it.
jooleeah
Apr 29 2005, 07:24 PM
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as he slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note
Wait...that didn't make sense
. I don't understand why there were no periods in that paragraph, but anyway....
Sad story. It reminds me of the story where there was a couple in motorcycle and his brakes broke or something....anyway, sad.
HelloSunshine
Apr 29 2005, 07:28 PM
I've read it before. :[ It's so sad.
jue
Apr 29 2005, 07:38 PM
those things are so sad.
imaging my self in that place.
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