:biggrin:wow, thanks everyone for the wonderful feedback, I wrote this poem for my language arts class, and I even showed it to the guy I wrote it about, at first he didn't get what I was saying, and then he got it, and was really surprised! ergh

now he has someone else next to him, but its okay... i guess, haha i'll go cry some more

j/k...hes my friend still, thats all well ever be *sigh