I'm a superstar with pimp hands
i shoot fast back 2 back like rubba bands
kangsta is the way to be
cuz that's the only way you can see
u see me on my white tee

you lost me with the last two lines =/
kind of... short...

hibyekthx

Stop trying to be so damn HARD!

*points and laughs* "kangsta is the way to be"

Its not bad. At least you didn't copy and paste

Hmm? Um, I'm having trouble understanding that. =\ Come again..?

Jason...just stop...we've already told you you look like a poser every time you do this...why keep making yourself suffer D:


It's sort of short, but like the dude above me said, at least you didn't copy and paste.


I don't get the "u see me on my white tee" part. ._.

oh jason...how i wish you listened to my reply...

Jason, Jason, Jason. the word Kangsta is so lame. it's asian people trying to be black people trying to be italian people trying to be irish. It's just not going to happen so all of you people go back to your day job.

Marriage is a vow taken before God or spiritual leader. Nearly every mainstream religion condemns that perversion. Just stay common law. You can make your commitments outside of that law. You're already making habits outside of the church of which the law was based. We still love you anyway, but Don't pretend to know what a word means when you obviously don't/don't want to.

you killed the song with the last line -_-

What is up with you and the word "kangsta"?

Umm the 1st two lines were okay but umm you got a little bit stereotypical with the last few...you`re getting kind of better I guess..but u still SUCK.

i thought it was sort of okay, but the last line ruined everything. haha.

no no no dont tell him to stop guys. i love seeing how foolish he's making himself look. But in a way im kinda amazed that he doesnt give a shiznat about what every one says and believes on what he want to be...a kangsta. good job Jason.

-Phil-

Jason...Jason ..Jason You try too hard.

sounds like a riddle.

nice try... but.. try, try again...

Those last few lines confused me.

Pimp.... hands? What?

why did you inculde a line about your t-shirt? that was utterly meaning less
and you're tweleve, please dnt have pimp hands. its icky.

other than that, not bad, and at least it was original, so kudo for that

Ummmmm, nice try...?

Damn kid, you are hopeless

ah....ah.....ah.......

ok people...atleast he submitted an original rap, and even tho all he gets is mostly negative feedback with no constructive criticisms with a big "YOU SUCK" written in their posts, atleast he gets right back up and still writes.

And for that, i really admire him. Cuz i don't know alot of people that would do that.

wow..this topic has a lot of replies..lol..
sigh..keep on trying..u'll eventually do better..

I actually thought this was okay. Except for the last line. It made me laugh because it made absolutely no sense. It's good to keep it short for now. When you can write, you can make your raps longer and reduce the chance of making a bad line and getting negative feedback.

he doesnt respond to good feedback so screw him. ha ha ha

better luck next time.

The first line doesn't even make sense. How do one have "pimp hands." Are you going to tell that it's an expression? So what's this about a white tee?

" you see me on my white tee "

....as in, a white t-shirt? Yea, you can't be ON a white tee. you can be IN one, though.

dudeee;
no offence, but really short and pointless? i dont get it. =/

if you dont get it, then you're in no position to judge. it makes perfect sense.

What the f**k does that have anything to do with this? Dumbass.

Jason, just f**king stop, i swear to god im going to kick yoru sorry little ass.

You know for some reason i don't even think you are korean. Some white kid pretending to be korean. You know? Like those fat guys on the internet posing as Chicks, and those D and D nerds posing as Buff Jocks, who make 400,000 a year and has an IQ of 170.

im sorry about this ...but i cant stop my emotions on this .....mods feel free if u delete this or block this if u ever have the urghe too .

Jason Two Words