Heathasm
Apr 24 2005, 01:15 PM
Violet myrtle evergreens,
Marry daytime skies,
As satin moods and siren soothes
Thrive on rum and rye
Laurels grace their presence
With lace upon their reef,
While placed with nowhere of sense;
Marred by other leaves
Despite the feud of jealousy
It’s all a grand of time
With a dancing hand and ditty,
While drinking down a lime
The thistledown of thistles
Make up the gowns of silk;
While Murmuring sweet nothings,
Imbibing honeysuckle’s milk
As night begins to lay;
Only the Laurels noticed,
Daytime start to slip away,
As the Myrtles stayed unnoticed
i entered this poem in a contest online a while ago and today in the mail i got a medal for it lol. i asked my mom if she wanted to see it so i logged onto sillygoth.com and showed her. she was like "'YOU DIDNT WRITE THAT WHAT DOES IMBIBELING MEAN? HMM HMM?" and i told her it was "imbibing" and that it meant drink. then she looked it up in the dictionary, convinced it wasnt a word-when she found it the deffinition said "to drink"
lol..looking back on that site i have over 50 poems..my mom said i should publish a poetry book xD i think im gonna do it
stephinika
Apr 24 2005, 01:39 PM
thats awesome, i really like it. amazing vocabulary and it flows so very nicely.

and congratulations!
EmmalieV
Apr 24 2005, 01:49 PM
Wow , I love that I have a few poems myself that have been nominated to be in a book at poetry.com.
GREAT JOB!
mzkandi
Apr 24 2005, 01:55 PM
QUOTE(Emmaliev @ Apr 24 2005, 2:49 PM)
I have a few poems myself that have been nomiated to be in a book at poetry.com.
I did too, actually two are published on their website
and
Congrats on the medal. The poem is really good.
Heathasm
Apr 24 2005, 02:13 PM
whoa, same here, poetry.com is where i got the medal from :)!
racoons > you
Apr 24 2005, 03:02 PM
thats stunning. i love it
amazing.... write MORE lol
loljuliana
Apr 24 2005, 04:41 PM
I have no idea what that poem means
IamRad
Apr 26 2005, 08:58 PM
awesome! congrats
sikdragon
May 1 2005, 01:57 AM
thats so sad. the person must be hurt terribly. Really good. the first 6/7 i've ever given.
toodlepops.
May 1 2005, 10:06 PM
Congratulations, you really deserved it. Its really good! ^^
someflipguy
May 5 2005, 02:40 PM
Good Work Chick.
not_your_average
May 6 2005, 09:31 PM
wait, i heard poetry.com was a scam.
but your poem kicks ass anyway!
FoOd
May 7 2005, 12:58 AM
I love it!
I hope to read more of your work.
Kathleen
May 7 2005, 05:01 PM
Wow I can see why you got a medal.
That's terrific! I love it. The third stanza's my favorite.
akjsd
May 7 2005, 05:05 PM
i liked the flow of the poem, and it sounded really deep . `cept i didnt really understand it -_____- heheh
emazing
May 31 2005, 06:25 PM
That's a great poem - where'd you learn to write like that?
ItzOnlySydney
Jun 4 2005, 02:14 AM
great job i never get madals for mine because outside of cB i am so scared of what people will think that i don't show them my peoms.
sunissed14127
Jun 4 2005, 05:14 PM
Congrats! Good luck on the poetry book!
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