that much more to cry
a penny-worth of sigh
a tear drop's full of truth
and a crystal clear sky
lets me know of power
blood running through our dreams
ten times ten is fifty
everythings upside down
a million whispers echo
a silence worth of sound
fifteen ways to get nowhere
one straight unwinding road
curving through the zig zag
got to get you home
fifteen ways to get nowhere
only one to love

I like it! It is different and has a good flow =)

that's really good, jamesy.

I really like that part.

Gosh. I love your poems. Very nice.

That's my favorite part!

James, it was very nice! The flow...awesome.

Sorry, my thought are kind of jumbled right now and I don't know what else to say other than, IMO, this is one of the best poems you've written.

i love it, the last lines especially. it flows so very well when being read. james, you are amazing.

it's fantastic!

thanks everyone ;)


there is a lot more traffic in writing nowadays!!! i'm LOVIN it

I like this poem.

Poetry always sweeps the ladies off of there feet.

really like the poem.. but dont you think someones gonna like steal it or something?

noy really.... i mean if anyone wants to use it for anything, they can pm me... i'll just be flattered

Wonderful peom, You're very good w/ adj and describing.

That's really awesome. =]

wow. I really love ur writing. amazing job, once again



Very true, actually. I love when a guy can write about their feelings and such in such a unique way

oh i love it! great job james!

You do have a way with words.
I love the last two lines the best.
It describes life and has a bit of romance in it.
Good Job ^^