This is a short poem but I want to know your opinions.

It's Just A Dream
I want to be close to you
I never want to let you go
I want to dream about you
Wherever my mind flows
I would want to think about you
Every single step of the way
I will always love you
Even if my mind turns gray
I have always wanted you
No matter how hard it would seem
But the worst part about it is
It's just a dream

For a second, I read it as "gay." Haha. Nonetheless, it's a nice poem.

Aww that's so sweet =D Aww, u write poetry too? I used to.. then I lost the book that I wrote like my best poems in and after that.. I just couldn't write anymore...

Aww so sweet =)

its really sweet.. and deep. but its so sad.. =( just a dream..

Aww If that was based on some real dude. Lets beat him up!

That poem reminded me of christina's sn...damn dreams.

- Chinkieeyedpnoi

I'll always love you...Even if I fling feces on your face... I think thats a beter line

I don't usually write poems but I like this one girl right now so I just want to write poems to let it out or something like that.

Wow it's really sweet.There should be more thoughtful guys like you.

nyce poem. its nyce

nice poem =),
i hate dreams...well mines, when you wake up, you wanna go back, reality hits you and you feel even more lost. but that's just me

Yeah sometimes you wish those good dreams would come true.

though thoughts could be deceiving..

(Winter Posted on Apr 9 2004, 1:56 AM)


why can`t guys show their "thoughtfullness"??

*sighs*

a friend of mine has a xanga for every feeling he has..

haha..

lol it reminded of me it too! nice poem hun

that's pretty damn good. i love poetry but none of that corny pointless shit. yours really had meaning behind it. i loved it.

aw...is this based on a real thought/feeling/fantasy? I have thoughts like those sometimes; I'm not good enough for the guy I like.

awww seems like it's from ur mind...right? hehe i mean.... yeahhhh i guess...lols but newais it's cute~~ hehe seems like u dun wana turn back nd' jus keep on going... ^^

man..ur poem is totally relating to me right now..good job.