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ChaOzXx
a girl and a guy.. on a winter chill
only young love was what they could feel
the breeze of each others scent.. melted each others heart
when they caught each others eyes.. it was young love from the start
started out friends.. as best friends should be
saw more in each other then others could see
never seen close together in public but close at home
making each other vows to never let one another be alone
as days grew on so did the feelings within
hearts never torn apart but troubles were to begin
her dad had a problem and the problem was he
it was hard for them to see each other every other day
however there love never faded away
time goes on and things only get better
patience is the key to everything in this love letter

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loljuliana
Wow; that created a whole scene in my head. Great job =)
yukichan
wow..that was good..i can imagine it happening..
gladz612
nice... i really like it.
pingpang_0811
nice job~
i can imagine the view easily in my mind
KissMe2408
awwwww...lol you did a great job :) Very sweet poem. The parts i liked the best were:

QUOTE(ChaOzXx @ Apr 16 2005, 9:29 PM)
the breeze of each others scent.. melted each others heart
when they caught each others eyes.. it was young love from the start

however their love never faded away
time goes on and things only get better
patience is the key to everything in this love letter

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amazing job!
MiLKDUD_DOKiE
wow.
HelloSunshine
Wow. I loved it. Beautiful job flowers.gif
jooleeah
That is truly adorable.
toodlepops.
Really sweet, I'm speechless.
pinayprincess
awwwwwww!!!! *tear* thats so cute/sweet --everything!!! lol
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