it was a spur of the moment thing i am sorta iffy on it so what do you think? btw it would nice if i could have suggestions for a title. i am bad at titles =/:

running from life but getting no where
someone please help me!
trapped inside a glass box
screaming loudly though no one seems to hear
can't you see my smile is fake?
i'm crying for help
someone please help me
take me away from this horrible place
i wanna go home!
but where is home?
has everyone abandoned me?
where are the people i thought i could trust
someone please help me!
i'm bleeding now
the knife's fallen to the floor
someone please help me
crying tears of shame
i wanna go home!
some please take me home
i'm waiting for my hero
where are you?
someone please help me!
hello?
is anyone there?
why can't you hear my screams?
please help me..before it's too late

I just love the expression it sends to me. I'm no poet expert but watever expresses your own thoughts ideals and heart..that poem is just pure gold.

haha that sounded sappy but hey..I like the poem soo yea

if you like it like that make it into someone yelling into the reciever of a phone. and title "A Dead Life Line" voila there's gold.

thanks so much! i thought ppl would say stuff like "omg! it's so stupid! get over yourself". lol that comment meant a lot to me thanks so much =)

bomb-squad... as the title

like an emotional timebomb which bneeds to be diffused... yeah... i'll edit back witha better one

lol...glad i could be of some help =]

I like it. Good job. =]