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RiddleMeWonders
5 Phone Calls Ago
I Had to Let You Go
You Took Another
To Be Your Lover

But Who Did You Love
When You Saw Me For The First Time
And Did You Still Love Them
When You Kissed Me For The First Time...

Oh no...How can I let this go?
Oh, no... I have to know.

Who did you love
when you saw her for the first time?
And Did you still love me
When you kissed her for the first time?

Were there things I could have done
To keep me being the only one
Were there words I could have said
To keep me in your head... (not just in your bed)

Oh.. Oh, no.. How can I let this go?
Oh... Oh, no... I need to know...

Who did you love
When you saw me for the first time?
And did you still love them
When you kissed me for the first time?

Lindsey Kay
racoons > you
i love it!

the first stanza is a little blah.. but it gets so good!

i especially love:

Were there things I could have done
To keep me being the only one
Were there words I could have said
To keep me in your head... (not just in your bed)
stephinika
nicely done...i can so easily relate. keep up the great work!
baller30
this is great... i love it mucho
KissMe2408
QUOTE
Who did you love
When you saw me for the first time?
And did you still love them
When you kissed me for the first time?


Favorite part happy.gif You did a great job with it, and really knew when to keep repeating certain things. like that quote above. Please post more! your fans are a-waiting! lol nicely done lindsey cool.gif
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