What if life wasn't as it seemed,
or what it would appear?
Would you live your life the same,
or live your life in fear?
We live our lives day by day,
in this miserable world.
Only to be shunned by others,
and cornered by the world.
What if we were all the same,
no race, no color, no religion?
Would it all still be the same,
or is that only what I envision?
Life never seems to work out,
nothing ever gets done.
Is it the same for everybody,
or am I the only one?
Full Version: What if...
Wow. I like it. It's pretty good. Especially the concept.
I don't think that life would ever work out if everything was the same. Everyone would be the same; doing the same; just boring.
I don't think that life would ever work out if everything was the same. Everyone would be the same; doing the same; just boring.
Amen to that.
good poem. Good Poem Indeed.
good poem. Good Poem Indeed.
that reminds me of The Giver, it's a book I had to read for english.
Everytihng was the same int he world in The Giver, and ti was boring and there were problems with it. Often they killed people because they were different, they did'nt fit in, so they had to be "Released". that's what they called it. A baby twin was "released" because you woudl never be able to tell them apart, causing confusion, which the community couldn't handle. Also they saw only in black and white, which made everything dull, lifeless.
not very apealing.
although I'm all for the no religion thing
Everytihng was the same int he world in The Giver, and ti was boring and there were problems with it. Often they killed people because they were different, they did'nt fit in, so they had to be "Released". that's what they called it. A baby twin was "released" because you woudl never be able to tell them apart, causing confusion, which the community couldn't handle. Also they saw only in black and white, which made everything dull, lifeless.
not very apealing.although I'm all for the no religion thing
QUOTE(HoodieObsessed @ Apr 27 2005, 9:08 PM)
that reminds me of The Giver, it's a book I had to read for english.
Everytihng was the same int he world in The Giver, and ti was boring and there were problems with it. Often they killed people because they were different, they did'nt fit in, so they had to be "Released". that's what they called it. A baby twin was "released" because you woudl never be able to tell them apart, causing confusion, which the community couldn't handle. Also they saw only in black and white, which made everything dull, lifeless. not very apealing.
although I'm all for the no religion thing
Everytihng was the same int he world in The Giver, and ti was boring and there were problems with it. Often they killed people because they were different, they did'nt fit in, so they had to be "Released". that's what they called it. A baby twin was "released" because you woudl never be able to tell them apart, causing confusion, which the community couldn't handle. Also they saw only in black and white, which made everything dull, lifeless.
not very apealing.although I'm all for the no religion thing
ya i read the book before too..it was so sad..
i like the poem..its really good...good job!
I like the concept...it makes you think.
Nice<3 Wow that was really good, really makes you think about life more.
^ agreed it makes you really think
Yeah, really makes you think. Really does.
Lovely poem, btw. ^^
Lovely poem, btw. ^^
This is a "lo-fi" version of our main content. To view the full version with more information, formatting and images, please click here.