Ok...my last ...post...sucked major twat...Can I say twat? Pg-13 as long as I can...lol...Hmm...it sucked twat...anyway...this poem.....I wrote a few months ago...it was a confusing time in my life...there was this guy...that I was starting to like...(the only guy) anyway...I was head over heals, I was scared at why I felt this way about a guy...but more than anything I wanted some kind of reciprocation...anything to make it less...odd...but to this day I've gotten nothing from the guy...and thats fine...I've moved passed it
I haven't had feelings for another guy since, so yea...thats my setup...my poem to ...the guy...I'll never love.


It's all about you

My life as I know it
f**king sucks...
without you
I'm sure you don't care
over and over
day after f**king day
I've waited for you
What the f**k is your hold up?
Why the hell aren't you here?
Tell me why I'm falling
faster and faster for you
...it f**king sucks
I can't deal with this shit
I need you
I NEED YOU!
LOOK AT ME!
...want me...
over and over...
need me...


TxT copyright © 2005 BeyezB

Umm.. The f words sound kind of out of place. I see the kind of emotion you're trying to convey. I like the concept, maybe you should just use better wordings instead of just saying it f--ing sucks, it f--ing sucks. Otherwise good. I like the last couple of lines.

^ yeah they do

^ I agree with them.
It doesnt really flow. Use better word choice.