BlueEyezBlind
Mar 30 2005, 12:22 AM
Um...bored...I give you three Micro Poems...just to let you all know I'm still alive. I have a part two coming for "Regret"
You
What am I to do?
....I'm falling backwards
Over and under just for you
S/M
Cold cold steel
bound and gagged is this real?
Edges biting
So exciting....
Juliet
Drove up at sunset
Looking hot in her red corvette
Damn...
Stick me with a bayonet
but please don't light that cigarette
TxT Copyright©2005 BeyezB
racoons > you
Mar 30 2005, 07:12 AM
i love the first two
Juliet just comes of as a trying to hard to rhyme, sorry
BlueEyezBlind
Mar 30 2005, 08:16 PM
aww..well thats the point hun...I rhymes too much...it's supposed to sound funny...ish glad u like the top two
y0urelectrikk
Apr 3 2005, 07:28 PM
I love the first one
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