someflipguy
Mar 29 2005, 04:39 PM
Never Have I Fallen
Your lips speak soft sweetness
Your Touch a cool caress
I am lost in your magic
My hear beats within your chest
I think of you each morning
And, dream of you each night
I think of your arms around me
And, I cannot express my delight
Never have I fallen
But, I am quickly on my way
You hold my heart in your hands
And, I pray you never give it away
-Ryan C. Narciso-
HongKongDong
Mar 29 2005, 04:42 PM

beautiful (no that didnt really make me cry but it was nice)
I feel for you man, keep that feeling there for as long as you can.
smthngcrprategrl34
Mar 29 2005, 05:52 PM
that's amazing! beautiful
ryanoman
Mar 31 2005, 02:18 PM
I really like it. Nicely written.
stephinika
Mar 31 2005, 07:28 PM
thats so sweet, and very nicely written. lovely.
KissMe2408
Apr 2 2005, 09:46 PM
aw that was really sweet :) Great job!