BlueEyezBlind
Mar 25 2005, 11:54 PM
Little Bit Of Nothing
I've got nothing
and that is going to make me cry
My life is currently void
Empty
Of all serious meaning
I'm alone.
Broken after a long relationship.
I love you she said.
I love you...
How can those three little words...
bring a man to tears?
I've got nothing
Nothing
As I sit I try to write something
anything
Unlike me, this isn't my style....
What is my style?
Surly not this forced piece of shit
This isn't a poem
but a rant and a rave
Some tears and some sorrows
I'll be better tomorrow...
then...
still with nothing
I'll regret writing this
this...
TxT copyright©2005 BeyezB
ItzOnlySydney
Mar 25 2005, 11:56 PM
whoa thats good.
racoons > you
Mar 26 2005, 08:22 AM
it is excellent... but what happened with all the random threads with th sam ename... *confused*
BlueEyezBlind
Mar 26 2005, 08:44 AM
Oh..the site wasn't responding when I posted the original...so I hit refresh a couple times lol. I can't delete the messed up posts. I'm sorry. :)
racoons > you
Mar 26 2005, 09:11 AM
^^ no worries... actually i think its happened to me acouple of times
i really like the last line
Rachel
Mar 27 2005, 10:06 PM
i loooove it! esp. the part about saying I love you.
iheartjohn
Mar 27 2005, 10:39 PM
Very, very nice.
`SWTWiNKLE3YES
Mar 28 2005, 12:41 AM
u did a nice job on this .. really good.
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