Yesterday my friend came over .. and we wrote a little love poem! lol we're amateurz, so it sounds sort of weird:

i didnt think i could love
anyone as much as i love you
for the sound of ur voice
makes all my dreamz come true


i need u to be there for me
constantly waiting and listenin to my pleas
i need u there to cheer me up
i need u there to wish me good luck

so ... waddaya think? lol

nyce poem. its betta than the poems i've written.

Wish you good luck for what?

NICE! kinda short tho. maybe you should make it longer.

DUDE i didnt get to see you at the concert! hahaha

wow very nice

For future reference...Poems don't have to ryhme...But it was nicely done.

To xjjajeengx ... I THINK I saw you but i wasn't sure!! What chair are you??

BTW, thanks for your comments about the poem!

nice poem

Nice poem.

There should be more poem threads....I like poems..SHORT POEMS...Nothing more than 10 lines...Otherwise i won't read it

short poems. heh. why won't you read long poems?

Well elongated tonge girl, I don't like long poems because my attention span is so low that mostly I get bored with something then just leave it alone. It happens so freq *walks away from the computer to chase a fly*

haha. anyways okay so.... its not a bad thing to have a elongated tongue. i enjoy it. A LOT.

anyways, so... have you ever liked any long poems at all? i mean what if the poems has lot of lines, but only contained like 3 or 4 words per line?

YEs...I like your elongated tongue... I enjoy lots of poems.. English lit for poetry was like my favorite college class... But I really just couldn't sit and read poems forever n ever...I could read them all day if I were jogging on a tread or somethin ....

haha nice poem