You Said You Loved Me
My world was a mess
Then everything I was turned inside out
You took my heart,
gave me your trust
Then you said you loved me

You had me upside down
twisted right side in
Then...
My trust,
torn all to hell
bits and pieces
Heh, who needs it?

You said you loved me
You said you loved me
I took your heart,
gave you all my trust
Then baby you said you loved me

What was I supposed to say?
I'm sorry...
What more could I do?
I said I loved you....
I took your heart
With your best friend twice last year

txt©2005 BeyezB

that's good. when you said "heh who needs this?" you probably could have done without the heh, it doesn't really fit but it's my opinion and your poem so whatever you want. it is good though

Its nice. I like it.

the best friend thing was pretty.. wow. haha.

wow..that was good..good job..

lol wow was really good, i totally wasn't expecting the best friend thing part at the end. but great job :)

That was realli good!!!...I loved how you put down real emotions even w/ the heh...thats how you felt thats how it should be writtened down if you felt it...

Great. Sounds alot like a song with the repitition