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Yo
Im a korean and i aint bein a disgrace
I aint black but Im still mack
Never test me without proper authorization
My lack of patience has cause me to get mad
And explode right in front of your face like a airbag
Your rhyme is fake, your brain is child's play to manipulate
I create lyrics too intricate to imitate
Movin at a velocity
That'll break your stop-watch if you're clockin me
My concrete jungle is like Jumanji/But iller than what you seen in the cinema
A five foot eight nigga wit more horsepower than twelve cylinders
My brain consists of twin pentium chips
That's double the clock speeds of a 5-86
And nuttin about my physical matrix is basick
Yeah basick u herd that name
U have a john legend song playin in ur xanga
Cuz you aint ordinary
Your name is harwood classick
cuz u wear them all day like u a basketball playa
inthemudhole
Did you write your own rap this time?
xTINAA
HAHAHAH OMG. HAHAH. First off you are being a disgrace to Koreans. I should know. I'm a Korean and I'm ashamed that you would write such a thing. And you say nigga? Why? Why would you say this? Especially when you are Korean?? Man, that rap was full of crap; it sucked. You start by rhyming and then end with no rhyme whatsoever. This whole thing just proved how ignorant and arrogant you are. And go ahead and get angry with me because of this comment. I couldn't care less.
dispn0ygonekrazy
haha once again your weak!!
gigiopolis
Haha.

You suck.

happy.gif
wind&fire
http://www.asklyrics.com/display/Sway_&_Ki...RICS/141029.htm

*sigh* you will never learn
gigiopolis
QUOTE(wind&fire @ Mar 20 2005, 11:36 PM)

...

HAHAHAHHAHA

Nice, Cariss.
wind&fire
its a given.. if jason raps... google it...
Paradox of Life
QUOTE(wind&fire @ Mar 21 2005, 1:36 AM)


QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 21 2005, 12:36 AM)
HAHAHAH OMG. HAHAH. First off you are being a disgrace to Koreans. I should know. I'm a Korean and I'm ashamed that you would write such a thing. And you say nigga? Why? Why would you say this? Especially when you are Korean?? Man, that rap was full of crap; it sucked. You start by rhyming and then end with no rhyme whatsoever. This whole thing just proved how ignorant and arrogant you are. And go ahead and get angry with me because of this comment. I couldn't care less.
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XD!!! HAHAHAHA! LMAO! You guys are awesome (except Jason). laugh.gif That's so funneh. I thought some of the lines were good and then I found that they were written by a professional. I was like, "At least some of these are reasonable" and then all the ones you wrote were the only thing that made it horrible. Keep trying; appearantly this keeps Createblog entertained :)
basick
dude you bit again???????????


ban this fool for biting and being a stupid ass motherf**ker
jambaJUICE
dude.. its not even funny anymore. you're just f**king stupid.

oh and next time you try to "diss" basick. try making sense.
basick
QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Mar 20 2005, 9:33 PM)
And nuttin about my physical matrix is basick
Yeah basick u herd that name
U have a john legend song playin in ur xanga
Cuz you aint ordinary
Your name is harwood classick
cuz u wear them all day like u a basketball playa
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did'chu try to diss me??? lmfao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! W ohmy.gif W... 10 bucks to whoever can explain what the f**k that meant...

i wear them all day like im a basketball player? ouch.... youre lyrical abilities are kilin my self esteem....
wayne
guy... ur not black.. dont use the word nigga...


ur rap sucks...


stop this man!!!

GO HOME JASON!


ed!t:

jason stop, your ass is korean
your style is wack,but thats sumfin u aint seein'
you thought 50 was better than nas
your existance is a lost cause
here take the remote, put your life on pause
now can we please have a moment of silence? (hahaha laugh.gif )
your whole flow was wack
stop saying nigga... u aint black
when steve hops on we hittin you front to back (no homo)
gonna expose you for the people to see
please let the hip hop style stop at the clothes.. please...
you aint a thug, you aint a gangsta...
you just a little boy... f***ing kangsta
you're a lame, you're a phony, you're a fake
i didnt know someone could accumulate so much hate
you riding on 50's camp like you got the g-unit peice
my rhymes are str8, yours are ripped and creased
attackin steve, as if you can survive the storm
after the massacre you'll be left worn and torn
tapping the wrong people will get your @$$ thumped
rapping about the wrong people will get your @$$ jumped

that first line, im not directing at anyone but jason.. i dont want any korean members jumping on my back about it.. _dry.gif
Levy2k6
nigga aint bad to say.. i say it all the time (im hispanic)..

but the rap sucked...
basick
http://www.createblog.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=70289

dont get too cocky jason
yukichan
gosh...its kinda funny reading this...seriously...if u cant rap, then dont try b/c it turns out weird..
xquizit
AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Effing loser.
salcha
original:
Yo, I'm a nuclear warhead
Right now you're provokin my detonation
Never test me without proper authorization
My lack of patience has cause me to get mad
And explode right in front of your face like a airbag
Your rhyme is fake, your brain is child's play to manipulate
I create lyrics too intricate to imitate
Movin at a velocity
That'll break your stop-watch if you're clockin me
My concrete jungle is like Jumanji
But iller than what you seen in the cinema
A five foot eight nigga wit more horsepower than twelve cylinders
My brain consists of twin pentium chips
That's double the clock speeds of a 5-86
And nuttin about my physical matrix is basic
I kick flavor beyond what your tongue is capable of tastin
You'll be so surprised you won't believe your own eyes

hahaha. this is funny.
keep trying :P
Rachel
yo, dumbass
stop tryin to rap
and stealing crap
it is annoying as is your face
you are just one big korean disgrace.


look at that, im f**kin a white jewish girl and i can make up my own "rhymes"
Im So Vain
now why must we h8 on basick? where is the love? and the word nigga was not appropriate.
smilz2dasun
um.. no. just... stop.

and what's wrong with john legend? i dont think i'll ever understand you.. maybe it's because you're young and not as mature yet.. i dont know what it is but maybe you need to just.. stop.



QUOTE(Levy2k6 @ Mar 21 2005, 7:19 PM)
nigga aint bad to say.. i say it all the time (im hispanic)..


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and do NOT say 'nigga' if you aint black. honestly, black people shouldnt even say it. it shouldn't even be used as a term of endearment (sp?) like how it is used today. does anybody know why and how that word came about and why its used.. so loosely? well i'll share some information with you kiddies that dont. *coughs* jason *coughs*

back when there was slavery, we all know the white folks referred to blacks as 'niggas'... well black parents had to raise their child to be familiar with people yelling at them saying "NIGGA THIS", "NIGGA THAT".... so that when their white masters 'er whatever would say it, they wouldnt get worked up or angry or respond back in anyway where it would seem disrespectful when they heard it. parents had to call and yell and shout at their kids this disrespectful name so that they are used to hearing this to save their kids from being beat or killed...

im not sure bout you guys... but i dont see how 'nigga' should ever be used as a term of endearment. mellow.gif but.. thats just me.
basick
word the n-word is real disrespectful if you arent black...

The word nigger carries with it much of the hatred and disgust directed toward Black Africans and African Americans. Historically, nigger defined, limited, made fun of, and ridiculed all Blacks. It was a term of exclusion, a verbal reason for discrimination. Whether used as a noun, verb, or adjective, it strengtened the stereotype of the lazy, stupid, dirty, worthless nobody. No other American surname carries as much purposeful cruelty.

.................

I remember in an issue of XXL with Dave Chapelle on the cover with Kanye West, Talib Kweli, Common, and Dead Prez.. and Dave said like the way other races want to say it and it used to be exclusive, now its sympomatic the way othre races want to ssay it, not to mention extremely stupid and disrespectful
ANG33ZY
what the hell
smilz2dasun
QUOTE(basick @ Mar 22 2005, 9:55 PM)
The word nigger carries with it much of the hatred and disgust directed toward Black Africans and African Americans. Historically, nigger defined, limited, made fun of, and ridiculed all Blacks. It was a term of exclusion, a verbal reason for discrimination. Whether used as a noun, verb, or adjective, it strengtened the stereotype of the lazy, stupid, dirty, worthless nobody. No other American surname carries as much purposeful cruelty.

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very well put.
lolita kitty
QUOTE(wind&fire @ Mar 21 2005, 2:36 AM)

hahahaha!
priceless shifty.gif

look hun, many black people these days take us white folk off as mean racist people. they should meet you... its an experience you wouldnt forget.

and dont say nigger.. or nigga... its racist and has more meaning then what you think. k? wink.gif
ohh_so_elektrikk<3
lolol thats funny. it still sucked, even if you did steal lyrics rolleyes.gif
Rachel
QUOTE(anqie @ Mar 22 2005, 9:59 PM)
what the hell
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what the hell is with your spamming?
basick
^ ooohh stubborn.gif

why are people still bumping this topic up
Ington
QUOTE(wayne @ Mar 21 2005, 9:15 PM)
guy... ur not black.. dont use the word nigga...
ur rap sucks...
stop this man!!!

GO HOME JASON!
ed!t:

jason stop, your ass is korean
your style is wack,but thats sumfin u aint seein'
you thought 50 was better than nas
your existance is a lost cause
here take the remote, put your life on pause
now can we please have a moment of silence? (hahaha laugh.gif )
your whole flow was wack
stop saying nigga... u aint black
when steve hops on we hittin you front to back (no homo)
gonna expose you for the people to see
please let the hip hop style stop at the clothes.. please...
you aint a thug, you aint a gangsta...
you just a little boy... f***ing kangsta
you're a lame, you're a phony, you're a fake
i didnt know someone could accumulate so much hate
you riding on 50's camp like you got the g-unit peice
my rhymes are str8, yours are ripped and creased
attackin steve, as if you can survive the storm
after the massacre you'll be left worn and torn
tapping the wrong people will get your @$$ thumped
rapping about the wrong people will get your @$$ jumped

that first line, im not directing at anyone but jason.. i dont want any korean members jumping on my back about it.. _dry.gif
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I liked this rap way more. Hahaha.


QUOTE(basick @ Mar 21 2005, 8:40 PM)
did'chu try to diss me??? lmfao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! W ohmy.gif W... 10 bucks to whoever can explain what the f**k that meant...

i wear them all day like im a basketball player? ouch.... youre lyrical abilities are kilin my self esteem....
*


HAHAHAHAHA!!
lolita kitty
QUOTE(xxcrazyjewxx @ Mar 22 2005, 3:40 PM)
yo, dumbass
stop tryin to rap
and stealing crap
it is annoying as is your face
you are just one big korean disgrace.
look at that, im f**kin a white jewish girl and i can make up my own "rhymes"
*

lmao, priceless xD
trail_of_memories
I don't understand u, because I keep seeing your posts and each time they are put down, why don't you learn from your wrongdoing/mistakes. Maybe if you tried a different approach, something more up your alley, u might even do well at it, but rap isn't ur thing. I don't know you well enough to say you have no talent but from the way you keep presenting yourself that assumption is pretty much made for you.
nightmare4taki
Come on Jason whats wrong with you dawg/
You just got embarrased on createblog/
We all no you will never be the man/
Is it just me or should this guy be banned/
I dont know how much of this i can really stand/
You copy rap because yours belong in a garbage can/
Now I really see that time is of the essence/
Why the f*ck am I battling an Adolescence/
You should just run and get out of this place/
Because now everybody knows that all you do is copy and paste/
You dont really want it so dont start and play your part/
Because you just got played like the strings on a harp/
Angel_Cece
woah. u dont have to be black to mack dawg. stop trying!
nightmare4taki
^ HUH
Angel_Cece
QUOTE(xxcrazyjewxx @ Mar 22 2005, 3:40 PM)
yo, dumbass
stop tryin to rap
and stealing crap
it is annoying as is your face
you are just one big korean disgrace.
look at that, im f**kin a white jewish girl and i can make up my own "rhymes"
*

see now that was a rap!
jennyjenny
HA.

Your "raps" are terrible. You only made up the last 6 lines or so...
wow...
nightmare4taki
lol
Chii
QUOTE(wind&fire @ Mar 21 2005, 2:36 AM)

oh damn it...i immediately googled it when i saw that jumanji thing...especially when he had that / in it
sikdragon
none of you can rap, how can you judge?
Rachel
QUOTE(sikdragon @ Mar 24 2005, 10:04 PM)
none of you can rap, how can you judge?
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i never claimed to be a raper like jason did. but yet, i can sitll make up my own rhymes while he has to google his...therefore i think i can judge
Mireh
nice icon
mzkandi
BOOOOOO!!!!! U SUCK!!!
william
^ haha.

QUOTE(xxcrazyjewxx @ Mar 22 2005, 12:40 PM)
yo, dumbass
stop tryin to rap
and stealing crap
it is annoying as is your face
you are just one big korean disgrace.
*

what's funny is that actually pwned jason's rap.
skateforfree
QUOTE(barelyy_coherent @ Mar 21 2005, 1:35 AM)
Haha.

You suck.

happy.gif
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Angel_Cece
this is sad...
to-devastate
R. O. F. L. M. A. O.
This is so funny. HILARIOUS! laugh.gif
Jason. Please. Go home.
Rachel
WHY DO YOU GIRLS KEEP BRINGIN THIS TOPIC BACK? it is over. we all get it that jason sucks
Hiphop d[-_-]b
QUOTE
none of you can rap, how can you judge?


why, did yu think he was actually good. or actually the last few lines, cos the rest was a PROFESSiONAL.

we can judge because he puts himself out here to get opinions. and apparantley everyone thinks he sucks.
lbjshaq2345
no rhythym no rhymes what like 4 bars rhymed good luck man you'll need it
Angel_Cece
I aint black but Im still mack: you tried this line so many times it isnt even funny.
and you know what jason... you just never give up. its annoying but i commend you for standing strong.
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