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f**k all the haters,
I be twistin bitches alot, have em sit on this cock
I wasn't prepared for this, I wrote my shit on the spot
I be droppin like early August, late July
Wit tracks that'll make you cry, hate you die
Stop frontin, you got no dough, might a had, but not no mo'
You mad cuz I knocked yo' hoe
While cops watch me, I got cats that watch po-po
My block loco, don't need a crew I rock solo
Or wit my nigga Gruff
These faggot niggas ain't as rich as us
I need chicks to lust, smoke my weed mixed wit dust
Go ahead and let your crew soup you up
In the ambulance, gon' have to come and scoop you up
f**k wit my last soul, my new shit is goin past gold
And if you don't agree, you's a a-hole
Mark my word, you gon' make me pump the bird
never hesitate to bump my gun
Kangsta World, y'all know where the f**k I'm from
I got two guns on my both hands
i reboot it before i shoot it
dont f**k wif me bitch
this is createblog yeah the home of the dead
f**k what they said
it dosent hurt me nor does it offend me
The game of life, got ups and downs, downs and ups
Kingpin cats lose they crowns in cuffs
Yeah chinks rap too, but still got them pies on the block
Bitches lookin at the size of my rocks, size of my knotts
Keep a stash box, ride wit them glocks

-Kangsta

still sucks? or improvement shown?
azn_r4pf4n
....... ur not kangsta nor gangsta. improvement not shown and u need to listen to some kpop.
HongKongDong
No improvement at all kid.

Kid what did I tell you? Stop! With raps like that, you have no chance what-so-ever.

You talk about shit that you have never been through... like you said Jason.. "dont front"
KELLYYY
Stop with the raps.
inthemudhole
AhaHhaha HaH haha Ha HA aH ahhaH aHha h AH h aH aHh Ah AH haAHha hah HAhahAH hah aH AH ha haH AH ha.

Okay, sorry.


QUOTE
....... ur not kangsta nor gangsta. improvement not shown and u need to listen to some kpop.

Agreed.

Maybe you should write a rap that has a point to it. It just sounds like you're saying "f*ck this, f*ck that" to everything. That really has no point to it.
wind&fire
hmmm... change you image... or dont post you photo so people wont laff at you so hard
rOckThISshYt
Okay, hun, you know.. I'm that type of person who tries to be nice to people and not to be rude, but all you're doing is spitting off crap to other people you are THE BIGGEST poser I have met in my entrie life. You think you're all ghetto when you live in the burbs of Jersey.

I also think that it's great to do something that you're passionate about. So... keep rapping. Just... don't make a fool out of yourself by showing it to other people. _dry.gif stubborn.gif
Chii
http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=twistin&r=f
QUOTE
1. Twistin
Twist the pizzie (pipe) as you smoke ice. The rolling effect allows the liquid to smoke better so that you get a bigger hit.


2. twistin
Layin' down rhymes.
We be straight up lyric twistin', dawg


umm...so you lay down rhymes on a b*tch or roll up them up...? huh.gif
jennyjenny
Dr. Seuss has raps better than you.
And he doesn't even rap.

I think you should stop now before you get jumped.

You said "f**k" like 6 times, and u're just using too much profanity even though u're 12.
magnificentmike
QUOTE(AzNxJenny91 @ Mar 13 2005, 10:35 AM)
Dr. Seuss has raps better than you.
And he doesn't even rap.
*

lmao

yeh, still sucks. no improvement shown.
JC4P
i think f**k is the only bad word he knowS?
x_o
QUOTE(JC4P @ Mar 13 2005, 2:09 PM)
i think f**k is the only bad word he knowS?
*


agreed
wind&fire
he said vagina before rolleyes.gif
sikdragon
the funny thing is, it's about being real. You tryin to be. f**k these faggots that be hatin. Dont ask to get better. Dont ask for opinion. f**k them. That's the point of rap. You lay it out. But seriously tho if you gonna be real. be real. Dont try to be the image of a kangsta or whatever that is. Be you. They laugh cuz you're self-conscious. If you put it out there dont ask for if you did better. That says that you think it sucks. What people appreciate is confidence. in the words of that white faggot, "f**k all y'all if you doubt me, im a mutha f**kin piece of white trash, i say it proudly." thats how you should be. not white trash, but proud regardless.

You had a good flow to start, but you screwed it up at the end.

I dunno why the hell anybody would wanna be gangsta, its just a wannabe gangster. The only reason they aint gangster cuz they too pansy-assed worried about gettin shot or thrown in jail. Gangster doesnt get caught. Gangsta is hot-headed and loves the law.

Funnier thing, white people trying to be black people who trying to be whoppers, who tryin to be irish. and then oriental people trying to be white people trying to be black people trying to be whoppers, trying to be irish. It's sad. This only to the faggots who fit the stereotype. do you?(you is generalized)
xquizit
QUOTE(Jason61992 @ Mar 12 2005, 11:59 AM)
f**k all the haters,
I be twistin bitches alot, have em sit on this cock
I wasn't prepared for this, I wrote my shit on the spot
I be droppin like early August, late July
Wit tracks that'll make you cry, hate you die
Stop frontin, you got no dough, might a had, but not no mo'
You mad cuz I knocked yo' hoe
While cops watch me, I got cats that watch po-po
My block loco, don't need a crew I rock solo
Or wit my nigga Gruff
These faggot niggas ain't as rich as us
I need chicks to lust, smoke my weed mixed wit dust
Go ahead and let your crew soup you up
In the ambulance, gon' have to come and scoop you up
f**k wit my last soul, my new shit is goin past gold
And if you don't agree, you's a a-hole
Mark my word, you gon' make me pump the bird
never hesitate to bump my gun
Kangsta World, y'all know where the f**k I'm from
I got two guns on my both hands
i reboot it before i shoot it
dont f**k wif me bitch
this is createblog yeah the home of the dead
f**k what they said
it dosent hurt me nor does it offend me
The game of life, got ups and downs, downs and ups
Kingpin cats lose they crowns in cuffs
Yeah chinks rap too, but still got them pies on the block
Bitches lookin at the size of my rocks, size of my knotts
Keep a stash box, ride wit them glocks

-Kangsta

still sucks? or improvement shown?
*

Wow Jason. That was pretty good...











Cuz it wasn't you. You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this?

http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt

^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.
stephinika
^^
wow. thats just ridiculous. stubborn.gif
william
QUOTE(AzNxJenny91 @ Mar 13 2005, 10:35 AM)
Dr. Seuss has raps better than you.
And he doesn't even rap.
*

rotf. agreed.

what's pathetic is you steal raps, and people STILL hate on you when they don't know it's stolen. that's how much people dislike your attempts at rapping.
cocoalightning27
^ correcto

Hey, at least you didn't steal this one...thats why it sucked even more

edit// o hey, u did steal it....write your own....maybe it will be better....*snicker*...Rofl

http://www.getlyrics.com/lyrics.php/Union/...#39;s+Freestyle
wind&fire
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 15 2005, 8:59 PM)
Wow Jason. That was pretty good...
Cuz it wasn't you.  You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this?

http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt

^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.
*

i was just about to google it
KissMe2408
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 15 2005, 4:59 AM)
Wow Jason. That was pretty good...
Cuz it wasn't you.  You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this?

http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt

^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.
*


lol that's a no-no Jason, you can't just steal raps from other sites and claim them as ur own. But try sitting down and writing somethan of ur own..inspired by things that really happened in ur own life. ya know?
Chii
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 15 2005, 4:59 AM)
Wow Jason. That was pretty good...
Cuz it wasn't you.  You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this?

http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt

^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.
*

ohmy.gif i can't believe you did that... _dry.gif

and to think that i was going to say something encouraging to you _dry.gif
jambaJUICE
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 14 2005, 11:59 PM)
Wow Jason. That was pretty good...
Cuz it wasn't you.  You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this?

http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt

^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.
*

AHAHAHAHAHAHA. damn kiddo, i never thought you could sink anymore lower. lmao.
basick
thats f**king ssad man.. biting off some wack dude


LMAO
uLoVeMikeRoch
Wow thats sad, and if those were your lyrics, your just a 50 cent rip off.
innovation
what has the world come to?!
Angel_Cece
*pulling hair out* what dont you understand?? y.o.u. s.u.c.k.
Rachel
why is this back? hopefully jason has the common sense not rap, no NOT TO POST ever again in CB
ryfitaDF
you the stalest MC i EVER did see.
mzkandi
if you really a gangsta and got all this dough the why the hell you on CB...I mean really.......shouldnt you be out poopin cats or something


ps. please come with you lyrics man, damn do you suck that bad that you have to jock from someone else....wait dont answer that...hahaha
yukichan
QUOTE(xquizit @ Mar 14 2005, 11:59 PM)
Wow Jason. That was pretty good...
Cuz it wasn't you.  You have stooped to an all new low. Did you really think no one would catch this?

http://www.ohhla.com/anonymous/rap_comp/th...ny_free.the.txt

^ Check it out ya'll. Those aren't Jason's lyrics.
*


lol...thats funny...gosh..
if u cant rap, dont try...b/c its weird..
sikdragon
if you're gonna steal lyrics, steal them from somebody good.
Spirited Away
QUOTE
this is createblog yeah the home of the dead
f**k what they said


hmm.. a contradiction?

this is createblog... and you're here.... you're one of the dead... smart... real smart.
mzkandi
QUOTE(basick @ Mar 26 2005, 11:08 PM)


lol!!! biggrin.gif
xTINAA
Jason. Will you never learn? Just STOP.
QUOTE(basick @ Mar 26 2005, 9:08 PM)
It's funny how he signed it. Haha.
videogamsta
lmao i love that petiton and jason..... u suck stop stealing other peoples work and stop plagerising
lolita kitty
jason, your signature almost takes up a page
fix that, dammit.
and your not funny. your rap sux. your not gangsta or kangsta.
deal with it
Paradox of Life
QUOTE(sikdragon @ Mar 26 2005, 5:32 PM)
if you're gonna steal lyrics, steal them from somebody good.
*

Lol!! This is so funny. I remember when you first started posting, but I never would imagine it'd get this out of hand. Since appearantly you're retarded or you can't read or something, it probably wouldn't matter if I told you you were the most idiotic fake rapper I've ever seen and the biggest poser as well. You aren't gangster, you're an asian kid sitting on his computer, googling for raps by unknown artists (that suck) thinking you can get away with it. People can tell that it's not you. People have styles of writing and if you're stealing them from different artists, then it's obvious to tell that it's not you. You are not improving because ... what can you improve on if you're just stealing other peoples' materials? What are you trying to get out of this? If you really enjoy rap, how about rapping some? Stop copy and pasting and rap BY YOURSELF.

And don't put it on Createblog, please. Show it to the hundreds of fans you claim to have. rolleyes.gif
y0urelectrikk
Rap = Crap.

I pitty you.
sikdragon
amen. rap is like miming. the bottom of the performance food chain.
azn_r4pf4n
i don't think it's necessary to reply on this topic again. he's not rapping no more, so why reply?
sikdragon
in response to what they said about his rapping.. isnt that what replying is all about?
azn_r4pf4n
QUOTE(sikdragon @ Apr 3 2005, 5:51 PM)
in response to what they said about his rapping.. isnt that what replying is all about?
*


ya... i know, but i think jason gets the point.
wind&fire
you know what im not abjecting about the return of the rap competition in forum games... hate on jason ALLLLL you want ....
heartsx3
QUOTE(mzkandi @ Mar 26 2005, 3:21 PM)
if you really a gangsta and got all this dough the why the hell you on CB...I mean really.......shouldnt you be out poopin cats or something
ps. please come with you lyrics man, damn do you suck that bad that you have to jock from someone else....wait dont answer that...hahaha
*


Lmao.Hes probably someone who doesnt even rap..just wants attention on CB which is retarded _dry.gif
dahding
aww, no one likes jason.

yay.

and if ur gonna steal something, don't change it into ur crap lyrics. cause u just diss the artist who wrote the original lyrics. shame on u.
tweeak
now, personally, i would not know a good rap if it repeatedly knocked me on the head with its profanity, but im willing to bet that is far, far from being one
..:loveee.NuTTii
QUOTE
Or wit my nigga Gruff

A nigga is a stupid black person-are you a stupid black person? No your only stupid. stubborn.gif

I'd like to hear you make up all this shit just like that/Another no-good rapper trying to fake fact/Stop you stupid act 'cause your not dealin with fools/Trying to twist and bend all these rules/Cuz boy we all know your kangsta not gangsta/Stick to your own rhyme/Maybe take some time/Sit down with your head down/Try to act ashamed/Stealing someone's lyrics ain't no game
....
Ok that sucked....we'll all pretend I said nothing ph34r.gif
HongKongDong
QUOTE(..:loveee.NuTTii @ Apr 8 2005, 9:28 PM)
A nigga is a stupid black person-are you a stupid black person?  No your only stupid. stubborn.gif 
*



You have got to be kidding me... stubborn.gif
tweeak
i think she meant only stupid black people should use the word, but i could be wrong

i dont know. i dont know why im kind of halfway defending her, either
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