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alli
so i wrote this quote..tell me what ya think..i think i need to edit it a lil bit..so here it is..tell me what yah think!! ....

So as the sun started to set,
and the waves continued to crash,
she tucked herself into bed,
no night kiss once again,
but she would do the same thing again tomorrow,
just because life goes on.

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korbana05
its good... sounds more like a poem than a quote though
alli
kayy thanks! anyone else like it?
rOckThISshYt
Ehh.. It's okay. A bit more catchy, maybe?
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