I don't know why I wrote this "mini-poem" either. I was just bored and I wanted to put something creative and origional in my AIM profile, so I came up with this. (Again, it has absolutly no relevance to how i was/am feeling.)

she spoke her mind
until they trampled her words
she opened her heart
until they tore it apart
she had a smile on her face
until they put tears in her eyes
she lead a good life
until she died inside......



Just tell me how you like it and why, if you can. I think it's just how I feel about what goes on with other people. Not necissarily me. But.. yeah... Just.. leave some love. Or hate if you wish.

heart heart heart

thats an awesome poem !
great job (;

wow i really like that. great job!

Question:: what do you mean?


PS: thanks everyone