to-devastate
Mar 9 2005, 09:45 PM
Useless
My heart is empty.
For nothing is inside.
and all the true of me.
I must always hide.
As I bleed painfully,
my heart is pouring out.
My mind, my whole world,
always filled with doubt.
All negative thoughts,
there is not sudden good,
and along the deserved lines of life,
I don't do what I should.
My good thoughts escaped.
I don't have much or a lot.
The only thing I wanted,
was just sitting there to rot.
It's like I couldn't capture.
It's like I couldn't see,
why musn't they love me,
for as much as i love thee.
The candle is burning.
Time is running out,
all my memeories avoided or blocked,
plus all the pain shouts.
Poison slips in at nine,
at eleven or ten or five,
and as I slowly close my eyes,
this is my last goodbye.
--x who0ps
Mar 9 2005, 10:32 PM
nice poem (:
i like the last paragraph best ! [=
Azn_Angelx
Mar 14 2005, 09:28 PM

how dark. xp very nice. =]
d0rkbaby
Mar 14 2005, 09:39 PM
i really like it =) . i felt like that at one point of my life...
bby_cutie
Mar 14 2005, 09:57 PM
that was great...i can almost imagine myself being in that position.
fl1p_cal1_boii
Mar 15 2005, 10:55 AM
it was really a cool poem...it brought all my thoughts intu perspective...
very sadd tho...
Teesa
Mar 18 2005, 01:28 AM
aw..how sad..my favorite part is the second paragraph about the bleeding.
wounded
Mar 28 2005, 07:31 PM
really awesome poem. You've got a lot of talet. :)
krispy_kreme333
Mar 30 2005, 11:51 AM
that was awesome. i loved the last paragraph.
racoons > you
Mar 30 2005, 02:16 PM
^^
they are called stanzas.
i <3 the last stanza
the rest is just awright for me, dawg. lol.. randy jackson...
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